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[Kayol]

In response to post #9883418.

I don't believe in gender roles, my friend. Anyone can enjoy girly stuff, despite age, character and whatnot
And glad I am you liked it! Your words are always so encouraging, thank you for that!

[Kayol]

In response to post #9880032.

Ha! I couldn't write sexy even if my life depended on it... I envy you that, sweetie - when you do sexy, it's sexy as hell! ^^
I think you are right - he's been tamed on some levels, surprisingly by himself. It was rather hard piece to write since that whole "I can change this bad boy!" attitude can often turn out too... silly? I hope I didn't make it silly
I agree, love just happens and it's hard to distinguish exactly where and when it starts. Maybe he felt "that" durign the very first day? Maybe just the moment this story started? Who knows?
No worries, I don't think Saga would put the ball and chain on him immidiately! After all, she's not that kind of girl
Thank you so much!

[Kayol]

In response to post #9884361.

I'm really glad you enjoyed that little insight, dear! I wanted to do something like this for quite some time, the pieces of the story were circulating in that little brain of mine and I decided to let them out at last!
It happens sometimes, doesn't it? You think you should do the thing you usually do, but your own body refuses. It's like some part of you became an independent person and decided to take the matters into its own hands. So when my elven ladies' man wanted to do the ordinary things he does - you know, seducing other women, leaving the bed with only a flower as a reminder - that part of him stubbornly kept reminding him of Saga in a way he wasn't able to comprehend.
I'm so glad you liked that moment! I think it was a moment of accepting his feelings on some levels.
Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback!

[Kayol]

In response to post #9881431.

Oh, glad to make your day, dear! I also like girly stories from time to time, it's a great way to relax and forget about work, studies and so on...
I think he does, indeed,although admitting it and fully embracing the feeling may be really tough for him. After all, he was no broken soul looking for companionship - he was pretty content with his lifestyle and wasn't planning to change it. And then that silly assassin appeared and ruined all the fun
Glad you liked that little humourous pieces! I had to put them here and there - I cannot write serious stuff, I always have to make some jokes. I'm afraid I'm a jester - maybe I should start to call myself Cicero? The amount of crazy might be the same...
I really wanted to write a piece of their first meeting. No eyes meeting in a huge room or anything like that, it wouldn't fit them. But thinking about the technique of a sneaky girl - and admiring it, like a professional - that's a whole new story
Oh yes, Carlotta... that must have been an unpleasant situation. After all, she's rather admired by men of Whiterun...
I'm glad you liked the shots, dear! I took so many of them I had really hard time picking.
Thank you so much for your amazing feedback!

[kiparisova]

Wonderful story!
I really like what you're driving is not a simple narrative style "she went somewhere and found something and killed someone." You are incredibly realistic to describe the suffering and experiences of the individual. You pass the complexity and tragedy of the struggle with oneself, fear of the new and unknown. And it's not just whining, and on the really deep and strong emotions on who has to choose between a sense of duty and his own comfort zone. Thank you for the beautiful story that makes the reader feel and experience the emotions of all of your characters!

Edited by kiparisova, 01 November 2013 - 11:26 AM.

[evenstargw]

All these long comments below mine, and I have simply one word to say

Wow !

So when is the next chapter ?? I truly love your writing style

[Kayol]

In response to post #9898354.

Oh my gods, so many kind words... is it Yule today? It definitely feels like Christmas.
I'm so glad you find my style appealing! I like creating a character study of some sort, in my opinion building a character with his or her pros and cons, fear, anger, love, is really interesting. It's so nice to hear that you, as a reader, enjoy it as well!
Thank you so much!

[Kayol]

In response to post #9898437.

Each comment is appreciated - and treasured as a jewel, never doubt that
Thank you so much!
As for the next chapter - I have no idea, honestly. Whenever I'll be struck by inspiration or gather strength to develop the ideas I already have in mind

[KaWaIIRIPper]

In response to post #9882226. #9896079 is also a reply to the same post.

If so, I can understand. ^^ Even I once tried to write something... girly. I don't think that I can call it "romantic" or something. Sentimentally maybe. That was funny. But I tired fast and wanted to write something... comical, may be. Or just kill somebody. In game, of course. But I am not a writer, of course. Funny thing is that that trash was the only thing that I've ever brought to the end. Oh, again I am talking about myself(and too much). Someday I will end with this habit. Someday...
I really enjoyed. ^^ I've read some of your stuff before, I don't know why I've decided to tell you how amazing your work is only now. ^^ (Hope you can understand what I am trying to say. I can't find any mistakes, but I have a feeling that something wrong.)
You are right. When my character traveled with him, I had a strong feeling that the only thing he cares about is beauty. Good to know that this is not true.

[Kayol]

In response to post #9882226. #9896079, #9900353 are all replies on the same post.

I can relate to that. Anytime I want to write something romantic, tragic or whatever, I just have to add at least one joke. I have no idea why! Maybe I feel uncomfortable with all that seriousness and want to caper around a bit?
Yeah, so many times I wanted to kill somebody off in a story (George Martin style, of course ), but I'm too much of a softie, I guess, to hurt my dear characters. Damn.
So you write from time to time?
Come on, you can talk about yourself, I don't mind. I love exchanging comments, so feel free to do so
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoy my scribblings!
Well, I cannot speak for the creators of Interesting NPCs and predict their intentions, but fortunately I can show my own interpretation of Larkspur here (trying, of course, to keep him in character)

Edited by Kayol, 01 November 2013 - 04:00 PM.