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[Kayol]

In response to post #10151185.

Thank you so much!

[Kobalk]

Awesome, as usual

[Kayol]

In response to post #10155405.

Thank you!

[kiparisova]

Masterpiece! Very subtle psychological relationship between the loss of the eye and the loss of her father. I definitely like that you leave the reader to find their own meaning, their own truth in your stories. To participate in something interesting and exciting - this interactivity is very important for the audience.

[Forresthome]

Absolutely great Kayol!

[eluuene]

sweetie!!! I love your flashbacks!!!!
omg these words: 'It was the eye that made her cry.'
that was an fascinating episode.... I can't find proper words... some feeling of bitterness, sadness, surprise, shock, admiration for her skills
and also the pictures so beautiful!!

[greenbms]

Wonderful! I have no problem with the flashbacks I adore your storytelling so much!

I particularly loved this part "Father was just bored with our realm so he smuggled himself to the better, maybe more interested world. Mother missed him, so he smuggled her as well. And that’s it." - So so human! Thanks so much for sharing Kayol! <3

[Queenieangel]

Amazing and Wonderful !!

[HellScrem]

Hey Kayol yet another amazing work, job well done. but you could put a link of your previous chapter at the bottom, to make things easier to keep track of, i have no idea how many of your work i have missed and i am pretty sure there a lot;)

[setemares]

When I'm reading your posts, I always think that you are an amazing writer. <3 Not only about the words, or only about the story - but all together. You know how to compose a beautiful text to a beautiful and so emotive story.

And I love how you shoot the scenes, the details. My favorite in this post is that pic of her feets, in the beginning. <3 So innocent and delicate. And this is what I love about Saga: She is so innocent, angelical, however she is an assassin of the Dark Brotherhood. Her missed eye totally contrasts with these characterics, almost as it says that she is lovely and deadly.

And I really like this piece: "Sometimes parents have to tell only a small bit of a truth, allowing their children to sneak a peek into the scary world of grownups. To taste it, but not fully comprehend it for their own good. " - It's so so true! I always cacth myself thinking about the wrong ideas I had in my childhood; and how children take a little rock and create a giant castle with it.

Anyway, I really loved to know how she lost her eye too. Kadense knows how it hurts!
(p.s.: sorry for anything wrong in my english <3)

Edited by setemares, 21 November 2013 - 09:31 PM.