Shadow looked towards the figure.
I'm starting to hate this realm.THAT'S IT!!
Shadow flew high above the group.
It was a night so his eyes turned to bright blue flames,now he can see through the darkness in the horizon.
As he was scanning,down on the ground the others were waiting.Suddenly directly under Shadow,down on the ground,the others heard a devilish voice.
"Shadow!The time has come for me to end death!"
Suddenly from where Shadow was looking at a jet black bean shot and went directly through him.
The demon had fallen,lifeless....
Graal,without,delay swooped over to Shadow and check for signs of life or something like that.He didn't find any....Shadow had died
OT>dont worry guys.If you recall the rules,I'll be back.Oh that brings me to something i need to say about NecromancerG and reaper13
NecromancerG,Garrett has become a bit to complex for me to understand him.Now i cant remember who sre those 2 guys,his past and everything.Now i can't tell you to simplify our chararacter,im just saying you need to simplify the way you say the story so i can understand it.
Also Garrett is also vurtualy unkillable.Each of us has to be an equal.All killable.If you recall rule 2-no cheesewhizzing.Although you don't actualy do it-in a way you cheesewhiz by being unkillable.Shadow says he can't be killed,but you know his weakneses and on this post you see he CAN be killed.Why not make it so in a few posts or so,Garret is weakened and turned mortal and his godlike spells removed.Also this brings me to remind everyone of rule 6
Death.Dying in this story isn't loosing,since the magic surrounding the realm traps a life in it so therefore you soul remains.But your ghost can return to its body after 3 days,and then your skills,powers and everything else is greatly weakened for a day or two.To lose here your soul must be consumed by a demon,or destroyed by some sort of creature,spell,etc.The same goes for the corpse.And don't forget the option getting kicked.
Keep in mind you can't survive everything.
reaper13-your character just like Garrett,is in a way cheezwhizzing.You have incredibly high skills,lycantrophy(werewolf desiese),a "shrunken cannon"called heartbraker.Like Garrett,you are to powerfull and everything is just to easy for him,shade and rose.You need to "lower the power",keep in mind you can'y dodge or survive anything
Also this bringns me to remind everyone including myself the we need to be more descriptive with our posts especialy when fighting,remember rule 7
No rushing the story.When posting make sure your descriptive with your actions,the background and anything else "seen" in the moment/s.If you post posts too short its possible the story and the thread along with it to end and die.This rule isn't meant to be strict.People wont be kicked or removed,but they will be asked to be more descriptive.
If we keep up not beind descriptive i may have to make this rule strict as well.Please folow the rules abit more.And if you have and critisism about me please tell me,so i'd know what i'm doing wrong and correct my mistakes.Again i ask you to folow the rules a bit more strictly.Ok guys have fun posting