TeamBacon Posted January 29, 2016 Share Posted January 29, 2016 I am currently looking for a select few people who know how to read words and are willing to read a section of my mod that I have written. It will take approximately a full hour to read as it is about 17,000 words. I am looking for people who are ready to give feedback. The subject is a murder mystery with the Silver Shroud as the main character. There are multiple branching questlines going on that may or may not be hard to follow. I will PM you further information if you are interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmissaryOfWind Posted January 29, 2016 Share Posted January 29, 2016 I'm willing to read it, send it to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junnari Posted January 29, 2016 Share Posted January 29, 2016 Might be interested, is it more of proofreading or simply giving opinion on the story/content? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeamBacon Posted January 29, 2016 Author Share Posted January 29, 2016 I'm mostly interested in seeing if people can follow the plot and figure out who the real villains are or not. My mod is made up of 4 quests that intertwine into a single web of mystery, each one building off the other. But as a result it becomes quite complicated at times. I want to leave it as open as possible and make the player feel like they are solving the mystery as opposed to following a narrative that I send them down. At the moment I am just trying to see what areas I need to elaborate more on to get the desired effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boombro Posted January 29, 2016 Share Posted January 29, 2016 Seems cool. Send it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeamBacon Posted January 29, 2016 Author Share Posted January 29, 2016 I'll send out the links as soon as my image hosting comes back online. I have screenshots of my chosen locations for my plot points that help tell the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MRCAir Posted January 29, 2016 Share Posted January 29, 2016 Add me to the list Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IglooGreenHouse Posted January 29, 2016 Share Posted January 29, 2016 I'm an English Major! If you like I'll take a look at it, always excited to see mods that focus on storytelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowjack23 Posted January 30, 2016 Share Posted January 30, 2016 I'm a professional writer and magazine editor. I'd be happy to take a look at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
44Magfreak Posted February 2, 2016 Share Posted February 2, 2016 I've got some professional experience as a technical writer, proofreader, and editor. I'm retired now, so have some time on my hands. Perhaps I can help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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