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Lol it has, Sorry, for the slow response I've been very busy with finals and stuff :3 I've evaluated that audio file you sent me though, did you want me to tell you what I think here or in a private chat?

I've already downloaded it! Thanks!

LeilaDawn You know, just give me the raw stuff and I'll sort through it. That way I'll know what your good at and what may need help. Anyways I'm glad to hear its done though, the attention to this mod is getting me excited :3 Melendur Yes I like the idea of Zevran hitting on Manasus, and yes I planned on making Manasus attractive! So are you taking a shot at this banter or am I? OR BOTH MAYBE?!?

And yes, if Manasus ever learned about what the Qunari do to mages he would probably become enraged. Like, Hulk Smash status :3

Yes I suppose you make a valid point. Still, I think that if she ever finds out there was another way you could enter the fade (asking the first enchanter) she would disprove of killing Isolde. However I was thinking that if you say, annulled the circle, Yiyeni would accept that there was no better alternative. I'm unsure how to approach the Dalish view on blood magic, because it didn't come up in the first game, and In DA2 most of the clan hates Merrill for her dabbling, but Merrill thinks its alright, and Marethari only disapproves of Merrill's quest to rebuild the mirror.

Yiyeni is distrustful of humans but not so much of the warden because he/she saves her from the darkspawn. As she spends more time with you she becomes less irritated by humans as she adapts to her new life under your service. Also I think the banter was pretty good, but I imagined Manasus as a little more aggressive and he'd probably pick up on Sten's insults a little faster. Still I think you captured the core of Manasus' persona.

To Lenweelessar Well I definitely need someone who has enough experience with the toolset to build the mod, someone who knows how to insert the character into the game and consolidate all the audio and video files. I also could always use another writer, as not many people have expressed interest in writing the script. Lastly, although this isn't really a job, I need people to get the word out about this project, to attract other modders (I don't have many associations sadly...) To Meneldur Manasus is native to Fereldan so he would speak in and english/american accent. If you want to voice act him, I can write you something to read and record. If you want to be a scriptwriter, than create some form of conversation involving Manasus (such as a banter or maybe an argument between the warden and Manasus). If you need an idea of how Manasus would react to a situation I posted some scenarios involving him in my original post.

Ah! I see your point now. But in my mind I figured that the Dalish character wouldn't care because she already has near zero chance of seeing her clan again. And as for your offer to help, of course! Was there something in specific that you wanted to work on?

Here we go! One genuine banter for Rynnfox! This is supposed to be between Yiyeni and a Human Warden who has begun to show interest in her. I've written some little notes that I hope will help you when you record these lines. All you have to do is read Yiyeni's lines and attach them to a post. Feel free to ad-lib a little if you need to, whatever helps you keep it sounding natural. Try both of the accents that we talked about. Also, I think its really important that you keep in mind how Yiyeni's tone changes throughout this scene. Remember that Yiyeni is normally very confident (even cocky) and is always sure her beliefs, but also that by the end she stumbles around awkwardly, almost to the point of babbling. Setting: Party Campsite (Conversation starts) Yiyeni: You need something from me? Warden: Can we discuss something personal? Yiyeni: (jokingly) Personal? Yikes! That sounds ominous! Warden: I wanted to make sure you were settling in alright. Yiyeni: Well enough I suppose. I must admit you've got some colorful companions following you around. Yiyeni: (light-hearted) I can't imagine how you cater to all of them. Warden: Hmph... It's harder than it looks Yiyeni. Yiyeni: (giggling) I'll bet! They can be so funny though! Some of them even remind me of-... (suddenly disheartened) people I used to know. Warden: You must miss the Dalish. Yiyeni: (sadly) I remember them… I remember their faces. Merrill, Fenaryil…and Keeper Marethari. I miss them terribly. Yiyeni: (awkwardly trying to change the subject) Ugh, I’m sorry I’m getting distracted aren’t I? I should be focused on the blight, on helping you. Warden: It’s okay if you’re homesick. I understand. Yiyeni: (thankful) I know you do. It’s just that…(concerned) I don’t want you worrying about me. Warden: But I do worry about you. I care about you. Yiyeni: (startled) Umm…you do? Yiyeni: (awkward) I…I just…this is a little awkward. Yiyeni: What I mean is...(sighs)…I’m an elf. Not just an elf, I’m one of the Dalish! And…you’re…not. Warden: I know that. Yiyeni: (embarrassed) I-it’s not like that’s a bad thing…(almost inaudible)…I mean, I don’t think it is… Yiyeni: (unsure) I don’t know. I just don’t know. You have been so good to me… Yiyeni: (retreating) I need to think about this. I’m sorry but I-…please excuse me. (Conversation ends)

Personally I like the program Audacity for recording. Its free, easy, and allows you to easily edit what you've recorded. Although this program is my personal preference and you may have something better :3 Otherwise, I don't think we need any other software other than the DA:O Toolkit. Anyways I'm almost finished with a sample dialogue for Yiyeni for Rynnfox and if I'm lucky I'll post it tonight or maybe tomorrow. As for you, I'm always willing to listen to another voice actor. As soon as I finish my current task I'll write up something for Manasus.

Thanks for expressing interest Rynnfox! I suppose that if I wanted to keep this 100% lore friendly the accent would have to be Irish or Welsh. However I'm kind of intrigued by the idea of using this fantasy English accent. If you'd be willing, I'd like to hear both! I could write you a sample conversation between the warden and Yiyeni for you, and then I'd just need you to read the lines as you see fit. I'll post something for you before the end of this week, then all you'll have to do is attach some audio files to your post. Read them however you see fit, but I'll be sure to provide context and descriptions to give you an idea of the emotion I'm searching for. I look forward to hearing from you!

Thank you both for your comments, I hope you find success in your banter! Also I am a little confused, would you care to elaborate on how a female dalish isn't lore friendly?

Are you interested in joining my project? Then just follow these instructions! Voice Actor: If you want to apply for the position as the voice of either character that post your intentions on this forum. I will then post some sample lines that Manasus/Yiyeni would say on this forum. All you have to do is read and record the characters lines and then attach them to your responding post. I will listen to them and then let you know what I think! Writer: Think you can write dialogue? Write a sample conversation between the warden and either of the characters. Try to keep the banter as close to the descriptions I have given as you and then post your work on this forum. Animator: Post a link to any previous work you might have, or attach a sample of your creations! Coder: Same as the animator, links to previous mods you have worked on would be great!

Greetings everyone, I am an amateur modder and I am attempting to organize a collaborative project to create two unique companions for the main character in DA:O. Below is an outline for the two characters I had in mind, I hope that I can appeal my cause to other modders to help give players a wider selection of companions in the game. Character 1: Name: Manasus Race: Human Gender: Male Class: Mage Specialization: Blood Mage Manasus is a young apostate mage who fled the circle for his study of blood magic. Manasus' attitude is esoteric, to say the least, and occasionally arrogant, however should a female warden pursue him as a romantic interest he behaves somewhat awkwardly and takes the romance very seriously. He claims he learned blood magic for the reason that "there is no glory in bloodshed, I won't pretend there is." He hopes that by learning blood magic he can dispel fears of the school, and empower mages with this most useful, if controversial, power. He takes no pleasure in using his powers to kill, but he will admit that combat provides an excellent outlet to test the limits of magic. Voice Acted: Yes Romancable: Yes, Women Only To help characterize him, I wrote out some conceptual plot moments: First Encounter/Recruitment: After leaving Lothering the warden wanders into a confrontation between Manasus and chantry templars. The templars refuse to stand down, and the player can then decide whether to fight with or against the templars. If the warden helps Manasus then after the skirmish Manasus confronts the last surviving templar, begging him to tell the chantry he is dead, and to leave him alone. The templar outright refuses, and unwilling to compromise his safety, Manasus kills the templar. After this the player will have the option to recruit or kill Manasus or let him go free. If the player assists the templars than Manasus will be brought to his knees defeated. The warden can then allow the templars to execute Manasus, or alternatively, he can conscript Manasus into his party, whereupon the templars will begrudgingly leave, warning the warden that Manasus is dangerous. Reaction to decisions during the Broken Circle quest: Although he will originally express contempt for aiding the circle, he will express approval of the warden's actions if he/she saves the circle saying that compared to the Chantry and the Rite of Annulment, the Circle is the lesser of two evils. However, if the warden supports the right of annulment, Manasus will greatly disprove. He will be appalled by the warden's total disregard for the lives of the mages, as well as the warden's ignorant belief that the circle was beyond saving. Reaction to decisions during the Arl Of Redcliff quest: Manasus will support aiding the village against the attack by the undead. When the warden reaches the castle Manasus will approve slightly if blood magic is used to enter the fade, but only if he is sent through the portal. If the circle is summoned and the warden uses lyrium to enter the fade, no approval changes will occur. However, if the warden opts to slay the possessed Connor, Manasus will be infuriated saying a child need never die, and no parent deserves the punishment of seeing their own kin slayed. Positions needed to create this character: Voice Actor: I am more than willing to do this myself as I have a decent mic and editing software Writer: I can write dialogue for major plot points, or offer guidance and consultation on how Manasus will react to events, but I need a dedicated script writer for most of his dialogue Animator: To animate all cut scenes and dialogue involving Manasus. Coder: Well, to do everything else... Optional positions Additional Voice Actors Modder to design unique equipment for this character Character 2: Name: Yiyeni Race: Dalish Elf Gender: Female Class: Rouge Specialization: Ranger Yiyeni will be from the same Dalish tribe as the Dalish Elf Warden. Behavior wise she is very light-hearted and self confident. Somewhat self-righteous, she will almost always disprove of actions that can be deemed evil. In addition she has a deep-seated hatred for the darkspawn, as she wants revenge on them from separating her form her people. If the warden is an elf she will openly flirt with him/her. However if the warden is a human or dwarf she will be more cautious and less confident, worried about her relationship with the warden becoming awkward. Ultimately she hopes that someday after her debt to the warden is repaid she can track down her tribe somewhere in the Free Marches. Voice Acted: Yes Romancable: Yes, Bisexual To help characterize her here I wrote out some conceptual plot points: First Encounter/Recruitment: After leaving Lothering the player will encounter Yiyeni about to be executed by Darkspawn. The warden intervenes just before the fatal blow is struck, and a brief battle is fought between the warden and the darkspawn. After the player defeats them, he/she will help Yiyeni to her feet. If the warden is a Dalish Elf, Yiyeni will express great joy and surprise at finding her old friend again. If the warden is not a Dalish, she will simply thank him/her for saving her from the darkspawn. In either case, she will explain that while traveling North with the clan the darkspawn attacked the tribed and she became separated. She will sadly admit, that she had been fleeing the band of darkspawn for nearly two days, who had been hunting her the entire way. Yiyeni acknowledges that she has little chance of catching up to the rest of the clan, assuming they are still alive, and that she has nowhere else to go. The warden can then accept her offer to join his/her fight against the darkspawn, or she can be sent on her way. Reaction to decisions during The Nature Of The Beast quest: If the player sides with Zathrean and exterminates the werewolves, she will disapprove slightly, saying that they didn't deserve such punishment. However she can be persuaded it was the right decision. If the warden creates a truce between the Dalish and the werewolves, Yiyeni will approve and be thoroughly impressed with the wardens diplomacy. However, if the warden sides with the werewolves and slaughters the Dalish, she will outraged and appalled by the Warden's resort to bloodshed, as well as his/her disregard for the lives of her fellow Dalish. Reaction to decisions during The Arl Of Redcliff: If the warden chooses to kill Connor, Yiyeni will disprove saying that Lady Isolde didn't deserve to have her only son die. With coercion though, the warden can remind Yiyeni that Isolde brought it upon herself by employing Jowan and by keeping Connor hidden from the circle. If the warden uses blood magic to sacrifice Isolde, she will greatly disprove, saying it was unethical, unnecessary, and careless. She is enraged with the warden saying that the warden risked to much, and that asking the man who was the source of the entire ordeal to fix it with more of his corrupt magic was beyond stupid. If the warden summons the circle and uses lyrium to enter the fade, she will greatly approve, and express amazement that the warden somehow continues to save everyone. Positions needed to create this character: Voice Actor: I cannot as I am a guy... Writer: Again I can write dialogue for major plot points, or offer guidance and consultation on how Yiyeni will react to events, but I need a dedicated script writer for most of his dialogue Animator: To animate all cut scenes and dialogue involving Yiyeni Coder: Well, to do everything else... Optional positions Modder to design unique equipment for this character