joshuaadriel

Best of luck Tlafoon. I've also been quite busy, but I'm eager to continue working with you on this great project.

Is Faolan the name of the realm/land also?

Sure. :cool:

I think that you missed some possible responses from the player. Already "fixed" it. :cool:

I see that further down they are responses to the player, but there is an instance at the beginning where it isn't. *I suggest to use the "Intimidation" and "Persuasion" choices in instances like this one. Player Option 1: . . . As you wish. You may stay. Player Option 2: (Intimidate) I said dismissed. Player Option 3: (Persuade) It was not a question. Urg reaction 1: (stands next to player) Urg reaction 2: (slight fear; leaves in a hurry) Urg reaction 3: (leaves) Urg reaction 4: (Unsuccessful intimidation) My lord, I insist I stay as I’m supposed to. Urg reaction 5: (Unsuccessful persuasion) My lord, as I said, I’m to protect you at all times. *This is where it lost me. Player: Orcs have such an infallible disposition, wouldn't you say? +Brannon Option 1: (stares at Urg) It would seem so, my lord. +Brannon Option 2: They're a queer bunch indeed, my lord. +Brannon Option 3: (slight smile)

Since you asked for our opinion on the dialogue and studying to be a professional writer, I'm revising your dialogue (if you don't mind), have made annotations and so on, but I'm a bit confused; why does Brannon have multiple-choice dialogue? Isn't he a NPC and Lord Dracon is the player?

Just an observation: Brannon is quite tall for an Elder Scrolls Breton, is there a particular reason why? Is he a mix between Nord and Breton or something like that?

Really impressive work.

I'm a newbie with the creation Kit and was wondering if i could put dragon priest's animation in a High Elf NPC? Thanks in advance.