I spent about 12 hours with this problem guys needing to find a solution so I can quest my village mod. There are people that have figured this out as I downloaded a few mods to see the difference with my mod and other people working mods. It's actually easy now I know how and I figured it out because of this forum discussion. So thank you! The work around is just this, put all of the Quest Objectives, Quest Stages and Aliases in one Quest and any Dialogue in another. The quest breaks as stated above when you add dialogue, it doesn't matter if you do it first or wait till last, it still breaks, so just put them in different quests. What I did was have all of my dialogue for my NPC in one and this included quests, player dialogue and misc dialogue. Then put the quest on its own and just linked to it. When I did it worked perfectly! It made me happy!