Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 It is not my poem but i find it into a website long forgotten.I loved it so much and i like to share it wit you guys. (and ladies of course) :D Silmesse Sinome háran i marya silmesse; Ilmello sílar tinwi lómesse; Cénanten, i telpeva hendi, ve cennente i cuivie Quendi. Alasse antar i menelmíri, laitan mi anvanye líri. Oiale ná i silme vinya; tíranyes sí vi Quende minya, vi minya Cuiviéneno i cenne cala eleno. (Quenya translation) In Starlight Here I am sitting in the pale moonlight; from Ilmen sparks are shining in [the] night; They see me, the silvery eyes, as they saw the wakening Elves. Joy the heavenly jewels give [me], I praise [them] in the fairest songs. Forever is the moonlight new; I watch them now as the first Elf [did] as the first [one] of Cuiviénen who saw [the] light of a star. written by Helge Kåre Fauskanger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 It is come from my poetry archives. Written by David Chapman in an old dialect of Quenya. Númen Sindë litsi lutir sinomë.Ekkaia ripë heldë sariryannar.Númenessë Ambar talta undumennaar i eleni nainir qualmeryanen. Lómë túrë sinómë;Anquildëa alcareryassë.An sí ná i nórë yanna fëar tulirusien i nwalmë lúmeo. Rómenna ortar i oronti;Tára AmbarelloAr lëontar topir i ëar lumbenen.i métimë falmarripir anquildessëAndúnë pella. Sinómë eanye, nyéra:Tiruvanyë Andúnë.Ya ná Andúnë pella,Cúmanna,ar loruvanyëCúmo. (Quenya Translation) The West Grey sands flow about this place.The Sea sweeps upon it's barren rocks.In the West the World drops off into the abyssand the stars cry for her death.Darkness rules here;Silent in his glory.For here is the place where spirits cometo escape the torment of Time.To the East rise the mountains;Taller than the WorldAnd their shadows cover the ocean in gloom.The last wavescrash silentlybeyond the Sunset.Here I am, mourning:I shall watch the Westthat is beyond the West,into the Void,and dreamof oblivion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Here comes a big one! This poem's writer is Lukas Novak. He comes from Czech Republic and is one of the most famous Tolkienian linguists. I Omentie Vinyamasse I tella ciryamo tella ciryallo,ya tuvë mernë i tië Númenna,ciryallo metta Noldoiva, vanwëmi lómëanóre rómess' úvanya. I telda ciryamo, cild' ambartanen,et Ossëo helcë falmallon lehtaina,cuilenna nenillon mi sinda falassëNenion Herunen né enantaina. Istyalye men sina, ar oronteryar,sintelyes ilyë, almárië rissen.Nan Vinyamar yerna ondonen carnaná lusta ar vanwë i sinomë marner. Ardanna muin' avánientë,i lómëo halien nuldar Formello varnassë harien mi lúmë úvarna,tenn' umbar metya i estel intyaina. Nan lá ilya estel ná vanwa tenn'oioar ume ú tyeldeo Valion ormë.Or ulca Quendion ná voronwentai sí ëarello ngwalca tultaina. Amba a cena, orta órelya,entula minn' Endóreo lumbë,I túla elyenna, mi sinda collo,ná úner i yondoron Eldaliéva. Ter fírima Atan i estel antaina,ter fírima túlas, i hrívesse ringa,i tuile nan tuluva minna Endórear i Elen Estelo nauva tintaina. (Quenya translation) The Meeting at Vinyamar The last mariner from the last shipthat wished to find the way to West,From the last ship of the Noldor, lostin the shadowy, unlovely country on the East. The last mariner, chosen by the fatereleased from the cool waves of Osse,to the life out of the waters on the gray shoreby the Lord of the Waters was given back You know this place, and its mountains,you knew everything in the prosperous days.But Vinyamar old of stone madeis empty and gone those who dwelled here. To the secret realm they are gone,in order to hide, hidden off the shadow from the Northto have safety in unsafe time,untill the doom puts the end to the supposed hope. But not all [the] hope is lost forever,and the anger of the Mighty is not without end.Above the malice of Quendi is their faithfullnessthat is now brought out of the cruel sea. Look up, raise your heart,come again into the shadow of the Middle Earth,who is coming against you in the gray cloak,is nobody of the Elven-folk sons. Through the mortal Man the hope [is] giventhrough the mortal it is coming, in the cold winter,but the spring shall come to the Middle Earth,and the Star of [the] Hope shall be kindled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 This comes from Ryszard Derdzinski (kneel and bow before him :!: ). Written in Quenya. 'nuff said. Read the poem. Cuivienello Tol Eressëanna Telpina lindë nenilion rilma elellion unótimë 'Ela!' - lindalessë ontaina ná lambengwa ilúmë órenwar cendar Númenna. Alass' ar alma Eldamarwa ataltanë nu falmar nár ar serceva. Ninquë huinessë Helcaraxeva antoryanengwë órengwar, avamarnë ar etyë. Man Heceldamar nu huine anga-carmo, man ninqua ar firima rilmassë Silmarillion, erya estelengwa vasta yo Hildor. Ulyaina sercë alafiryar ar firyaiva sirir minë sirenen unótimë yénilíva. Silmarilli, alcar ar... úcarmë; sára ná sina ohta – nangwë sin haira; ar Eär ata tulta. (Quenya translation) Silver song of watersglittering light of the numberless stars ‘Behold!’ - in music our speech was born, when our hearts were turned towards the West. Happiness and bliss of Eldamar drowned under the waves of fire and blood. In frosty gloom of Helcaraxë we hardened our hearts, homeless and exiled. Either Beleriand under the shadow of the iron-crown, or in the icy and deadly light of the Silmarils, our only hope is alliance with the Followers. Blood poured over of the immortal and the mortals flows with one river of the numberless years. Silmarils, glory and... sin; Bitter is this war – victory so distant; And the Sea summons again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Written by Thomas Ferencz from Hungary in 2002. Good readings... I Anda Malle Laucë auta Ambarello. Á pusta, telcu! Siarë lá yonta.I asto hwinya or carinya, tuonyar rihtear pittavë,tárë yúyo hautar. Anar ruxa, ar wile yernavë oronti pella.Nwalca silmenen eleni ilwessë rilyar helcavë.Ausa nimba véranyo yéni yá (randar quíta?)tintila wilyassë imbë aldar. Pahtan hendunya.Cenië oira i metto lelyalëo fárëa ná. Lingastellessë indonya auressë inyë. Á hauta,indonya, á hauta! Láqua erin hequa selma.Quetintë, Eldar i eleni laitar. Inyë rúcëyétalentallo mettavalta, an selmanya taltanu i ringa alavaxië enta. Quettar centanyaquetiën ni hehtaner írë i minëa néca naltaaisto lantanë carinyanna. I centa aicanyarië Valain sa cuilë ná túrina, ilyëEldar nar wanwa, Naucor firini caitarnún nu ondor rómië límë lungë,an Moringottor unótimë ortiër. Quítavanima ná sa lambanya ná nútinaan írë quetin i quettar i sundor Ambarwatancavë ruxar nyenyala, ar Cúma ilúvë tópa. Ai! AnantaI cirya larta enta hópassë vahaiya, yaullume hiruvan. Var sië nin séya. (Quenya Translation) The Long Road Warmth has passed from the world. Stop, my legs! No more today.The dust swirls above my head, my sinews shake a bit,both rest then. The Sun crumbles, and floats tired beyond the mountains.Stars icily glitter in the sky with their cruel light.A sad vision of my self long years ago (or was it ages?)trembles in the air among the trees. I shut my eyes.It is enough to see the end of the journey all the time. It dangles in the rear of my mind every day. Rest,my mind, rest! Nothing remains but resolve.They say, the Elves praise the stars. I myself dreadtheir endless glare, for my will collapsesunder that cold perfection. The words, my messageto utter have abandoned me when the first faint glitterof fear fell on my head. The dire message,to tell the Valar that life is defeated, allthe Elves are gone, the Dwarves lie deaddeep under rocks too heavy to heave,and countless Morgoths have arisen. Perhapsit is proper that my tongue is knottedfor when I say the words, the roots of the worldwill surely crumble crying, and the Void covers all. But alas! stillthe ship waits there in that harbour far away, that I will never find. Or so it seems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Well, these are not poems, but very good exemples about the differences of the languages of Quenya and Sindarin. It is a lovely love letter; first one is in quenya and second is in sindarin. Hlaren quen i taurissen, láma i aurello íre omentánelme. Tennoio aiwi liruvar i herin olórenyaron, vantarye imbe laiqua narasse ar lótearwa peler. Avantielme ter tarsaye auri, voronnelme morne lendi ar únótime harwi. A eldava venda mírihendea, á larta, úvan cuina eressea. Áva hehta ni, antuvan len hína, ar már nilda. Vestan tyen, melme úva sinta ar estel lohtuva tavinya. Áva tulta i móre, melnenya. *** Lathron ben ned eryn, glamor uin galan ir govannem. An uir aewath linnathar a chervess olthad nîn : he bada min nadhras galen a parth lothen. Trevódiel orath drestennin, broniannem lennath dhuir a charnath arnediad. A Elleth ivorcheneb, dartho, ú-aníron cuinad ereb. Avo awartho nin, annathon le chên, a mar mhilui. Gweston le, meleth ú-thinnatha a harthad edlothiatha adwain. Avo doltho mhorn, melethril nîn. (Translation) I hear someone in the woods, an echo of the day we met. Forever birds will sing for the lady of my dreams: she walks between green pasture and flowery field. Having traversed troubled days, we endured dark journeys and countless wounds. O Elfin maid with crystal eyes, wait, I won't live alone. Don't forsake me, I'll give thee a child, and a friendly home. I swear thee, love won't fade and hope will blossom anew. Don't summon the night, my love. Note: Written in sindarin by Didier Willis. Translated from sindarin to quenya by Sébastien Bertho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Another good exemple of differences of the languages quenya and sindarin. These are two versions of Ring Poem written by J.R.R. Tolkien. ^_^ First one is in quenya, second one is in sindarin. Neldë Cormar Eldaron Aranen nu i vilya, Otso Heruin Naucoron ondeva mardentassen, Nertë Firimë Nérin yar i Nuron martyar, Minë i Morë Herun mormahalmaryassë Mornórëo Nóressë yassë i Fuini caitar. Minë Corma turië të ilyë, Minë Corma hirië të, Minë Corma hostië të ilyë ar mordossë nutië të Mornórëo Nóressë yassë i Fuini caitar. note: translated by Maciej Garbowski *** Neledh Gorvath 'nin Ellerain no i menel, Odo'ni Nauhírath ne rynd gonui în, Neder'ni Fîr Fírib beraid fíred, Êr am Morchír ned morn-orchamm dîn Ne Dor e-Mordor ias i-Ndúath caedar. Er-chorf hain torthad bain, Er-chorf hain hired, Er-chorf hain toged bain a din fuin hain nuded Ne Dor e-Mordor ias i-Ndúath caedar. note: translated by Ryszard Derdzinski (Translation) Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky, Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die, One for the Dark Lord on his dark throneIn the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie. One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind themIn the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Another very popular poem translation, written by J.R.R. Tolkien. Quenya translation (a very old dialect) made by Milan Rezac. Vanda Feanáró Nossëo Nai kotumo ar nilmo, kalima Vala thauza ar poika, Moringothonna, Elda ar Maiya ar Apanóna, Endóressë Atan sin únóna, ilar thanyë, ilar melmë, ilar malkazon sammë, osta ilar harwë, lau Ambar tana, só-thauruvá Fëanárollo, ar Fëanáró nossello, iman askalyá ar charyá, ar mi kambë mapá, herá hirala ar haiya hatá Silmarillë. Sí vandalmë ilyai: unqualé son antávalme mennai Aurë-mettá, qualmé ten' Ambar-mettá! Quettalman lasta, Eru Ilúvatar! Oiyámórenna mé-quetamartya íre queluvá tyardalma. Ainorontessë tirtassë lasta ar lma-vandá enyalaz, Varda Manwë! (Quenya translation) The Oath of the Fëanorians Be he foe or friend, be he foul or clean,brood of Morgoth or bright Vala,Elda or Maia or Aftercomer,Man yet unborn upon Middle-earth,neither law, nor love, nor league of swords,dread nor danger, not Doom itself,shall defend him from Fëanor, and Fëanor's kin, whoso hideth or hoardeth, or in hand taketh, finding keepeth or afar casteth a Silmaril. This swear we all: death we will deal him ere Day's ending, woe unto world's end! Our word hear thou, Eru Allfather! To the everlasting Darkness doom us if our deed faileth. On the holy mountain hear in witness and our vow remember, Manwë and Varda! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 A lovely sindarin song written by Jessie Christiansen. Naergon an Kharas Crist-Erui Find dîn morn be taurfuin, hennad be elin iavas silivrin, Magol dîn celeg, dagrant ú-rem, e milui ar idhren, E mell velethril eriol, athar phith thenin melethron, Ne thaurdinnu firn Michrist vîn nuin elenath e lasbelin. Men urem an arvellon, arnediad ah boeg cothath vîn, Am meriad ammen ne thraw, e callon vinai vedui, Beleg ho, u-verthant heriad dîr gudwarthen vregol dîn, Duliel ned i dhu taurvorn danc o adel na gui. U-'ernim nesto ho egor gedi acharn or chyth dîn, Arphent, "avlinno naergonath", a ned rainc bess vell dîn e firn.Cíniel hon caedol gwann ennas, beth vedui în, u-lathrannen, Ned i echad boe awarthad, noe eriol ónem a naen. Linno Kharas Crist-Erui, firn maethor thelion ned estel;Lasbelin gwaew linnatha o dínen ned ast dannen ho,Ne morn uireb uidafnen hennad dîn gilvíriel,I daur ned aur geleriol, ú-echuiatha tíro. (Sindarin translation) Lament for Edge First Sword His hair was black as forest night, as bright as autumn stars his eyes,His blade was swift, but seldom drawn, for he was courteous and wise,He loved but one, and she loved him more dear than any words can tell,In forest night beneath the autumn stars our First Sword fell. We were too few and too alone; our foes too many and too grim;To guard us in the wilderness no warrior was left but him.Yet he was stronger than they dared to challenge by direct attack,So struck him down from hiding, with an arrow in the back. We could not save him, nor could we avenge his death, although we tried;His final words were "do not grieve", and in his lady's arms he died.We could not honor those last words, for what else could we do but grieveTo see him laying slain there in the camp we had to leave. Sing Edge First Sword, who lived and died a warrior faithful to his trust;The autumn wind will sing of him, though silent sleeps he in the dust,And will not wake again to watch the morning forest growing light -His starlit eyes forever closed in the eternal night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabolic_Wizard Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Again a famous poem translated to Sindarin by Ryszard Derdzinski; written by J.R.R. Tolkien.Riddle of Strider! Pân i valt law thilia,Law pain i reviar mistar aen;Iaur i vell law thinnatha,Law thynd dyfn na-niss rathar aen.O lith naur echuiathar aen,Calad od dúath thuiatha;Adamminen i vagol vreithannen,Pen-thôl ad echannen i aran. (Sindarin translation) All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost; The old that is strong does not wither, Deep roots are not reached by the frost. From the ashes a fire shall be woken, A light from the shadows shall spring; Renewed shall be blade that was broken, The crownless again shall be king. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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