Ladyarafel Posted April 10, 2009 Share Posted April 10, 2009 The Oracles Return In the second day of the fourth yearWhen the extra day shall appear,Shall the Gates of Old awakeAnd open for Argethia's sake.But only when the Crescents silver lightShines brightly through the night,And it's radiance land uponThe Gates four hours before dawn.Only then shall come the Lady of Spring,Of whom the songs of old doth sing.Be watchful my people for this night,For She will save our land from it's plight. A poem I wrote a few years ago for my book "The Tale of Argethia"(it's not finished yet, I wrote the poem first) so tell what you think. :smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 I love it.excelleny tempo and rhyme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johny Obliv Posted April 13, 2009 Share Posted April 13, 2009 The poem is full of hope, it gives me a great feeling. Kudos ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ladyarafel Posted April 13, 2009 Author Share Posted April 13, 2009 Thanks! And thanks for the kudos johny :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ladyarafel Posted April 13, 2009 Author Share Posted April 13, 2009 Here's another poem I'm writing, A Discription of Freedom Freedom is like a bird that flies through the air,Diving and soaring without a care.Oh, how I wish I could be as freeAs that bird that soars high above the sea. It's still a wip so, let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.