I need help with finishing scripting second quest in my mod

[DwemerManiac]

I've just put in beta verion of my mod in SkyrimNexus: http://skyrim.nexusm...m/mods/47508//?

 

I've posted there description of my problem with scripting too:

 

Could you try my mod, edit in in SCK and see what isn't OK,fix it?Or send me a PW and tell what I should change,add or remove in scripts,conditions,etc.
First quest works fine.
But second- (id DWODwemerLanguage) isn't. Some things, objectives works (I used setstage command to try it) but some not,espiecially:
a)didn't work setting stage from 10 to 20 (and after conversation Tirian didn't take ArkchnadumzNotes from me)
b)at stage 20, when I wait for an hour in Markarth, courier appears and give me note(Wezwanie Tiriana), I read it,etc. but stages and objectives 24,25,30 didnt set
c)I continue conversation with Tirian, but at the end stage 35 didn't set and that's why he didn't give me "Translated Notes-Przetłumaczone notatki z Arkchnadumz"

Could you see it and try to fix it,or tell me what I should do fix it, where I'm wrong?
I hope you will like dungeons and my fist quest;)

[rhowington]

You need to show your script so we can look it over.

[DwemerManiac]

You need to show your script so we can look it over.

That's why I put my uncomplete quest mod in Nexus. So that you can open it in Creation Kit and see how does it look like- is sth missing, or I put too much things in some places. Of course if it is problem I will have to describe you every tab in my script mod-what and where did I already done.