zcul Posted January 12, 2023 Share Posted January 12, 2023 elksworth bannedReason:Inappropriate and discriminatory remarksBelittling other membersAggressively belittling other members’ contentsComments (excerpt) 13 February 2022 - 03:55 amcoomers deserve death18 February 2022 - 07:10 amLearn how to f***ing read17 August 2022 - 01:33 amWhy are you playing with sex mods? Can't you get a real gf?29 December 2022 - 02:21 amSkyrim modders might be technically skilled, but are never known to be good writers11 January 2023, 05:19 am Yeaaaahhh I don't know why this mod is so highly regarded.Some glaring issues:1. Voice quality is extremely poor and quiet.2. Writing is atrocious. The options that the DB give when they talk to Daegon are abysmal, cringe and stick out from the vanilla options like a sore thumb3. On top of that, she swears WAYYYYYYYY too often. It's so insanely immersion breaking it's nearly unbearable. No other NPC in Skyrim says f*** or s*** or anything really, aside from maybe one or two instances. The entire thing reeks of a Wattpad fantasy written by a 14 year old. The best advice you can do is look to GOAT follower mods (Inigo, being unequivocally, the best follower mod ever made, SDA/Lucien) and try to emulate that.4. I get the mod is new, so this is just advice for the future. Add more than one dialogue option. This goes along with #2, but also, I think inserting Daegon's lore should be done better than just talking to her and resuming her speech (which feels again, like Wattpad level quality. Like please, I beg of you. Get an actual writer to read through your lines because this is just bad. Rigmor of Bruma levels of bad.5. The voice acting itself. Again, please don't take this personally, but the VA is just awful. Coupled with the naturally quiet and poorly recorded recording levels, it comes across as way too forced and contrived. I can easily tell that you're reading from a script. Take advice from Inigo. Short, well written and conversational bursts go a LONG way over listening to a monologue. SDA had this problem in the beginning, and now it's one of my favorite mods ever. The dialogue feels natural, inquisitive and doesn't overstate its welcome.You have potential as a modder, because I understand that modding is difficult. And time consuming. But! I wouldn't take the time out of my day to write this if I didn't believe there was potential.Edited by elksworth, 11 January 2023, 05:20 am. 12 January 2023, 03:11 amI literally prefaced and concluded that I say this mod has potential and that I acknowledged the difficulties of making mods. But of course, the retarded manchildren are unable to hear any criticism and would rather simp for approval.Whatever.Edited by elksworth, 12 January 2023, 03:12 am.Pertaining mod (12 Januyry 2023) Last updated 11 January 2023, 11:17AM, original upload14 November 2022, 9:28AM, 19,819 unique downloads, 47,751 total downloads, 1,175 endorsements, last endorsed 12 January 2023, 4:35PM From the Forum and Commenting Guidelines https://help.nexusmods.com/article/22-forum-and-commenting-guidelinesWe do not tolerate 'trolling' or harassment of any kind. Do not belittle, discredit, or aggressively criticise another member or their content. If you do not like something or have nothing constructive to add, it's best to simply move along.Content that can be construed as provocative, objectionable, discriminatory, or abusive toward any real-world individual or group, may be subject to moderation. This includes but is not limited to content involving politics, race, religion, gender identity, sexuality, or social class. From the Moderation Policy https://help.nexusmods.com/article/27-moderation-policyAccount Suspension / BansRegardless of account status such as membership status or Moderation History, infractions of our Terms of Service and/or various guidelines and standards may result in account suspension at the discretion of staff. Reference postReference postReference postReference postReference postReference post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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