Zippy Zip-A-Long

[species5478]

The second 'verse' stirs a thought...the piece has a Native American feel to it. I'm friends with one such individual who speaks of entities who are shape-shifters and would do what Maharg suggests in his work.

[Maharg67]

Thank you, Species5478, for your feedback.

[Herculine]

I'm standing here up high,

Higher than the clouds,

Staring at the world below,

Lower than the grounds,

I see the cities' grace below,

The mountain's beauty and the trees,

The seas filled with peace.

The wonders of the nature here,

Still seen by anyone,

Below or not, It doesn't matter,

You'll see the wonders of the world,

That God has kept for you,

Greatness of the Nature and Peace.

 

Very nice! I love poems like this one!

[Herculine]

If I could fly I would soar above the clouds and let all my earthly problems fall down to the ocean

 

there they would be cleansed by the great ocean waves

 

so that later I might pluck them up again

 

and they would be much improved

 

 

If I could dig down faster than a mole or a wombat I would do so

 

and make for myself an earthen womb

 

returning to mother nature's embrace

 

and eating worms for lunch

 

This reminds me a bit of Lewis Carroll...

[species5478]

Cool stores! I agree with Dezi, that one is hillarious! I can't wait to read the rest of them, just started to read it. Kudos!

My first attempts at poems in English, second language.

I'm standing here up high,

Higher than the clouds,

Staring at the world below,

Lower than the grounds,

I see the cities' grace below,

The mountain's beauty and the trees,

The seas filled with peace.

The wonders of the nature here,

Still seen by anyone,

Below or not, It doesn't matter,

You'll see the wonders of the world,

That God has kept for you,

Greatness of the Nature and Peace.

 

Reminds me of my dragon...

[Maharg67]

Thanks for you feedback Hurculine, Species5478, Omeletter.

 

Your poem was wonderful, Omeletter

 

 

It was a long time ago, over twenty years

 

when I met a woman that I greatly loved

 

only to throw it away for hurt pride's pain

 

suffering then true pain for love's loss

 

the pain is gone along with the love

 

but still I wonder what could have been

 

Edited July 13, 2010 by Maharg67

[Maharg67]

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[dezdimona]

ha ha ha...great

[Maharg67]

Yo :banana: dancing is joy why not get a friend and dance as a pair :banana: :banana: or even better still invite a new kind of friend :bunny: or better still more than one :bunny: :bunny:

[species5478]

Yo :banana: dancing is joy why not get a friend and dance as a pair :banana: :banana: or even better still invite a new kind of friend :bunny: or better still more than one :bunny: :bunny:

 

LOL...dancing bunnies...I love it! Oh I'm so easily amused!