Netwit2008 Posted July 13, 2009 Share Posted July 13, 2009 Thanks to Dezi for introducing me to Druid's Garden. If you all are up for it, I'll share a piece or two or three, lol PLEASE NOTE MUCH OF MY POETRY IS ADULT IN NATURE!! If words I use are not permitted, someone do me the courtesy of letting me know and I'll either edit them to be more G-rated friendly, or remove the piece. I couldn't see in the pinned thread for this section where it said adult themes were a no-no. Ok, enough preamble, here is one of my pieces. This is one of the milder pieces so no adult supervision needed :cool: My Dreams I went walking in my sleepsearching for a dreamdreams no longer come to meperhaps I stopped making them feel welcomed like rainbow colored soap bubbles billowing from a child’s magic wandfragilebarely seenstrangely obscenepretty dreams that left me wanting got tired of the tough breakstired of love wrestling with hatenow there’s not even a crumb left on my platethe kitchen is open, but I’m still hungry pieces of dreams splattered all in my head spaceno one image ever staying put or in place for very longnot strong enoughor too strongfiguring out this puzzleis like plugging errant notes into a barely remembered song but it’s the same old daysame tired tunefragmented dreams don’t make any senseI feel stupid for the longingthough I’m far from dense maybe it’s just never my timedreams promised to and for mestill stick figures prancing in a straight lineif you think this piece is all over the placethen you get it- the pictures of my facefading in and out of realitywaiting for my dreams to come back to me I went floating in my sleepsearching for my dreamsthey no longer come willingly to meperhaps they just stopped feeling welcomed. ©TDM (02/27/08) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 13, 2009 Share Posted July 13, 2009 nice, very, very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonpen61 Posted July 13, 2009 Share Posted July 13, 2009 Excellent! Hope to read more! :yes: :starwars: :smile: :bunny: :banana: ;D :( :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netwit2008 Posted July 14, 2009 Author Share Posted July 14, 2009 Thank you Dezi and Dragonpen! I appreciate you checking it out. :thanks: Hopefully I'll get a chance to do some reading here in the next few days, I'm excited to see what you and others have penned. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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