L33Nexus Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 Shen Goren Info Full Nexus Page GET UR READING GIGS ON :P Revenge Of Shen'Goraan!!!Shengoren as a Imperial Battle Mage.Shen'Goraan as his daedric prince form. Quick information about Shengoren-- Lived in the years - 3E 374 - 411 22 years before Uriel Septims VII's DeathDied at the age of 37 (How? Read onwards)Served the empire from 16 years old to 25 years old and soon became a captain battle mage. served altoghether for 9 years. buut at the same time knew Jagar Tharn as a friend oblivious to his plots against Emperor Uriel Septim. Chased away from the Imperial city on false acusation in 399 shortly after Jagar Tharns capture. (Supposidly knew about Jagar Tharns plans.) --Sorry if the punctuation is bad i kinda rushed it :P-- Shen'Goraans story- Shen'Goraan was once a nobel being who served as a ImperialBattlemage/Captain for the army and people of cyrodill. his original name wasShengoren Arvius. Shengoren Arvius.Known as the BattleMage noble man until the dayJagar Tharn tried to assasinate the Emporer Shengoren was framed and said to be in on the plots to Trap the Emporer Shengoren swore hehadn't commited any acts of treason, he said he was in all the way to defend the Emporer but the city people said he talked to Jagar Tharn to much and the whole City turned on him. (Fire Arrow into his house whilst he slept) running for his life he found refuge in an abandoned cottageon the west side of cyrodill up in the Jerald Mountains where there was only a few bandits and travellers. Shengoren was wanted everywhere at a high bounty so he was always having to makehimself stronger for reasons of pure survival, After being cold and lonelyShengorn became like a ghost he had his fights with bandits every now and thenbut with not a single injury as his power with the force of magicka had risen to an outstanding level he was becoming as powerful or more powerful than the wizardDivath Fyr. He decided he wanted a change of atmosphere, as nice and peaceful as the mountains were they were also cold and becoming overrun by ogres and being depleted ofresources so he decided where else better than the thick forests of the west weald near the gold coast, he took refuge in and underground burrow alot like a cave but smaller and cosyer. he was recognised by Hiricine forbeing such a hunter and survivalsman, and later befriended him after a coupleof chores/quests for Hiricine he acquired THE ORB OF MOONLIGHT which he playedaround with but couldn't figure out how to work it hiricine told him this. "When the night skys are clear, the moon is shining full, you will reveal the truepower of the orb, and shall blood be spilt may the orb grant power to it's chosen" After all the nights of lonely suffering and misery and the acts of malice hehad witnessed, he wandered out of his burrow to seek help to see if he could clear his name and be free once again to be a noble protector of cyrodill, he found animperial forest huntsman and talked with him the guard realised who he was and was baffled then he was assertive Shengoren calmed the guard down and had him talk with the higher council of the imperial city. but it was a huge mistake! The hunter told the authoritys of Shengorens whereabouts through greed to get hishands on the high bounty money, Shengoren stood watch and heard footstep but many more than the single huntsman then he saw torches alit he still stood he watched as a row of 20 archers fired arrows blindly towards him he deflected some of thearrows but was hit by others injured, he tried to escape only to be ambushed by simple folks of the IC and other areas he was beaten down after a battle but the increasing numbers stacked large odds against him. He was taken to the Gallows he stood fatigue less as the rope was put around his neck his vision blurred, he focused on one particular man the huntsman standing smug holding a bag of gold coins. Shengoren had the last words to say:"You people once of my own, i protected and served the Empire helped it stand tall at the cost of my own life, i was accused, accusations against me arisedfrom the townfolk speaking of treachery and decite plots with Jagar Tharn, i pleaded to you i was Innocent... am innocent i lead a life of lonelyness heartlessness with death around every corner for no reason but accusation.forced to live in burrows and fight for my life, i seeked redemption to be welcome back amongst you, but instead i was betrayed by the Greed of that man.*POINTS TO THE HUNTSMAN* Huntsman: just hang him already he's decieving scum! Shengoren: you killing me now will change nothing but get revenge for a crime i did not commit, you will trust the conspirecys and be lead by greed so i ask youthis, will you let yourselves be lead this way or will you spare me my life. Huntsman: Just kill him already his blabbering on annoys me... forget it ill do it The huntsman weilds his bow and shoots an arrow at Shengoren *the arrow deflects off of the orb still laying solitare in his cloak* Huntsman: Damn you die already!! *quickly Shengoren wields the orb and strikes the Huntsmans head but at the same time is stabbed* the huntsman in Anger races to the lever and pulls it watching shengoran drop the orb the townfolk just watch and laugh *Set him alight* Shengoren is set alight burning alive with the drops of blood sizzling as they hit the ground dropping bit by bit onto the orb now the moon shines bright and full the orb begins to glow red mist ascends and shengoren burning skin and flesh drop onto the orb (Muffled but load with pure anger)*Shengoren opens his eyes and shouts! - You have betrayed me for the lasttime! forced to live in misery, but have belief that i will return and youto will Endure the pain this innocent man has had to for so long.* *A small explosion occurs and the orb closes up consealing the tortured soul of Shengoren* ShenGoren appears whole in the realm of hiricine but Shengoren isn't the same he's an abomonation a demon with deadly increased power. Hiricine: Shengoren, I see the orb served you well. Shengoren: w...Where am i why has my voice changed whats happend to me. Clavicus Vile: You where betrayed my friend. you where struck down by your own kind but not to worry myself and Hiricine have granted you eternal power. Hiricine: Now arise friend, take your place as a Daedric prince. arise as Shen'Goraan the Daedric Prince of Misery and Malice. Shen'Goraan: (Loud Demonic Roar) i will have my revenge the people of cyrodillwill pay dearly for there Deception, and i will... I WILL BE, A GOD! Hope you like it it's pretty lore friendly and is quite a nice story ;) After you have read this please comment weather you would like to see a picture of Shen'Goraan :D I've already made him in blender :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andy12750 Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 Em.... Its good. A couple points, I still don't understand exactly how he lived 64 years but died at 37? Huh?And either Molag Bal or Malacath= Prince of MaliceLastly, Jagaar didn't make an assasination attempt on Uriels life. He sent him to Oblivion, took the position of Emporer, and started the Imperial Simaclarium, which lasted 10 years. MEANING he would have had to lived longer, as during the Simaclarium, the legion didn't give a crap about criminals, just stuff like going to war. Edit-And you kinda lost me in the part where he just appears in Hircine and Clavicus Vile's realm (especially since their worst enemies) and they make him a daedric prince? If he was an Imperial, he probaly worshipped the Nine for a large portion of his life, not making him something that the daedra would look over. And also, you never really mention that he becomes a 'hunter and survivalsman'. And how in the world would he live if he was hanged? Most people die immediately after they fall, and he surely wouldn't live once he was burnt? And the whole "I HATE YOU!" thing while burning could possibly be a rip from Star Wars. Edit- One last thing. Whys this in the request section? Sounds like it should be a fanfic to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zprospero Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 @andy12750 I think it's in the requests section because he intendsto create a questline mod for him and wants help with it. I think Clavicus and Hircine being in there works, becauseit instantly sounds suspicious. They both must have theirown plans for Shengoren. Daedra couldn't care less aboutmortals. They would only do this if it served them in some way. @L33Nexus Well, I think that Malacath is called the Prince of Cursesand Molag Bal is the Lord of Troubles. I don't think that there is an official prince whois basically the Prince of Hatred/Malice. Peryite is the closest thing to a Prince of Misery,as pestilence is his domain. It all sounds good. Might have to dig through the lore to makesure that the Jagar Tharn thing could work. Although, a lot of peoplehave done things that they could be accused of treason for. And yes, I think we'd like to see what he looks like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33Nexus Posted December 28, 2009 Author Share Posted December 28, 2009 @ Andy- I Don't know where you got Hiricine and Clavius being worst enemys from because the only Enemy of Clavius Vil is Ebonarm. and it's the same for Hiricine here take a look. (((http://www.uesp.net/wiki/Lore:Hircine))) Also i got the date wrong its from 374 - 411 sorry about that. OK that knowcks them two down. yeah you need to understand more yourself maybe try reading about more of the daedric princes in the lore section on UESP Wiki thats where i got all my info from - there goes the malacath and molag thing. the thing about Jagar Tharn - Before Jagar trapped the emporer Shengoren knew him as a friend after he was caught out Shengoren was blamed for being "In On It" So Shengoren ran away for 11 years which all fits the math - he was brought back and killed but the power of the orb kept gim alive and kind of binded his suffering and pain and in rage he shouted. Obviously when he was brought back Zprosperos pretty much figured it out by instinct he became friends with Hiricine and hiricine saw a vision and decided to bind his power with Clavius Vile AKAthe granter of power and wishes to make him into the Demon/Prince Shen'Goraan but not only was it they did it out of friendship they also did it out of something more...---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- @Zprospero - Yes Yes Yes you have got it and you are like myself you to have read up on daedric princes and have got the idea and know what i'm talking about OverView--- The Orb gives Shengorens tortured miserable soul an evil powerful twist but not only for himself but for Clavius and Hiricine to that will be for later on. Ok if you figured it out that should just about cover it. and now i leave you with this render of Shen'Goraan a twisted demon made from: - An Orb Of Moonlight- A Grant Of power From Clavius Vile- A Powerful Being- A Twisted Miserable Tortured Soul Full Of Anger- A Completed Prophecy which can be reversed by an ElderScroll but more on that later As for the shouting bit i have changed that it made it kind of Cheesy so now it should be ok. Picture nothig great yet but i will keep updating him looking for parts that make him look less... demonic he will have a mist that follows him :D and his eyes will burn. Picture (Edit) a better Shen'Goraan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grmblf Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 hey nice story but you've told us only it's background, what happens then? Is there a quest or will it be a book to purchase? xD I think people should calm down with all this new daedric princes, I know zprospero is making an amazing work with his mod, and that it's not very common to see here a mod being developed 'openly' with such success, moreover the fight against a daedric prince is likely to be the most epic thing that can happen (that's the climax of both the MQ and the main from SI) so I think it's normal people like this kind of things, but I don't like the idea of adding lots of new gods. There are a lot of forgotten "minor" gods mentioned in the lore that could be brought to live if that's the point, but I rather see this "demonized" Shen'Goraan kinda the god's choosen, his "champion" as you are meant to be for other gods, so a simple mortal (or undead, or whatever) with the favour of a prince, but not a prince himself. I'd suggest you plan this mod as a side-quest for the big project to add the other planes and/or Azura's crusade in prospero's mod. Releasing Sengoren's soul could be the first step Hircine makes to strenght his army if eventually things go wrong, but it's also a quest on it's own (I suspect this guy is gonna claim for vengance), but that requires some more planning and in the end it's your idea so it's up to you, that's just my suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andy12750 Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 Hmm....... Im sure Clavicus has ALOT more enemies then just Ebonarm. Like Umbra. AND in Daggerfall, Clavicus mentions that he 'never has and never will be on good terms with his brother Hircine' If I were you, i'd take it into word and run a spelling/grammer check on it. And you may want to mention that he was freinds with Jagaar. You forgot to put that. PS Don't forget to edit the 311 to 411. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33Nexus Posted December 28, 2009 Author Share Posted December 28, 2009 Yes you will have to fight Shen'Goraan and the quest starts by a new book by who else than the greedy huntsman who is very very old. and makes a big headed story out of it. But also it includes the whereabout of Shengorans lost over time Burrow where the quest os set to continue at the moment i'm working it fully out i just wanted to tell people about the story and it seems after it has been edited and things are more wxplained people like it :D so i guess it's got two good things. - A new daedric prince/creature prince is always awesome - making this will give me some training for more mods and will also help me in the construction of Ouroboros. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33Nexus Posted December 28, 2009 Author Share Posted December 28, 2009 And yes thankyou ill do that now andy :) also how do i spell check on the nexus site i never knew how to do that :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zprospero Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 Yes you will have to fight Shen'Goraan and the quest starts by a new book by who else than the greedy huntsman who is very very old. and makes a big headed story out of it. But also it includes the whereabout of Shengorans lost over time Burrow where the quest os set to continue at the moment i'm working it fully out i just wanted to tell people about the story and it seems after it has been edited and things are more wxplained people like it :D so i guess it's got two good things. - A new daedric prince/creature prince is always awesome - making this will give me some training for more mods and will also help me in the construction of Ouroboros. Are you sure you want that book to be written by the huntsman? I thought since Greed+Hunt that he might have been Hircine or Clavicus in disguise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andy12750 Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 I don't thinkyou can? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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