Keanumoreira Posted August 9, 2010 Author Share Posted August 9, 2010 Wow...this was a tantalizing story. Very concise, liberally written, and expertly told. I'm surprised I missed this! I think I need to spread my reading around...I wonder what other jewels I'm missing? This is how you should write. Blending description, with the story and character dialogue at just the right moment is why I smiled at the end. And alluding to the android's nature, but not revealing the true state of it's existence until the end, was the hook. You guys are so kind, especially you Species, thank you for your support, but by no means do I ignore the rest of you. Believe me when I say I appreciate all this attention. Thank you guys. :happy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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