Swordfish42 Posted July 5, 2010 Share Posted July 5, 2010 Hey there guys i'm swordfish, known as CjayS42 on Wattpad. I post my stories and poetry there. As this is the Druid's garden, a place for sharing such things, I decided to do a little advertising. here's my account link.CjayS42Here's an excerpt from my most popular story, The Shadow Dancer. <I love the cold, rushing embrace of the air as it gently caresses my arms, like a mother with her child.>(I don’t)<I love how my hair and clothes flow silently behind me, like a bird in the breeze>(I don’t)<I love the adrenaline, the excitement, the joy, that makes me feel so alive!>(Well you’re not going to be alive for much longer, because if you haven’t noticed, we’re falling off a building into moving traffic.) Rose disregarded this. Why should death get in the way of her fun? (Got any brilliant ideas?)<I thought this was pretty good… it gave them the slip didn’t it?>(Out of the frying pan into the fire if you ask me…)<Well I’m not, so keep your thoughts to yourself>(It is difficult to hide your thoughts from something inside your own head.)<You’re in my head>(Details details! Flying traffic, 12 o’clock!)<That’s where we’re headed.> Note: i meant to use parenthesis instead of speech marks. To find out why, go read... :tongue: The Shadow Dancer is a Sci-fi/action/Mystery set in the future, in the decaying and corrupt city of Arelis. It has a lot of postive reviews and the first chapter is pushing 2500 reads. I have another story, Twin flames, a dark Fantasy/Romance, which i wrote to please the ridiculous amount of teenage girls on wattpad :biggrin: I also have a variety of poetry...which is quite personal to myself and i don't like discussing it much. read it if you want, i don't mind. Well, i hope you enjoy my stories/poems.Thanks guys!-Swordfish/CjayS42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burnagirl Posted July 9, 2010 Share Posted July 9, 2010 This gives me the feel of some Anime type story where I'm able to peer into the mind of a character, just before they wake up from their daydream by the sudden and loud ringing of a telephone, or by the doors of the train suddenly opening or by being shaken by a friend or collegue - "hey ... hey", they call "wake up, are you day dreaming aagain" ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swordfish42 Posted July 9, 2010 Author Share Posted July 9, 2010 This gives me the feel of some Anime type story where I'm able to peer into the mind of a character, just before they wake up from their daydream by the sudden and loud ringing of a telephone, or by the doors of the train suddenly opening or by being shaken by a friend or collegue - "hey ... hey", they call "wake up, are you day dreaming aagain" ?Actually, her thoughts are consistent like this throughout the story. And she doesnt wake up or anything, this is another 'casual' day :tongue: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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