Imperial Juristiction

[Isador0]

ACT 00 PROLOGUE: THE FOUR

 

They approach. They are Death. They are the...............................................................................

 

 

 

 

Monitors active gas traps.... active turrets active lockdown................... broken

 

 

 

 

 

 

audio active

recording

 

 

 

[assault cannons firing]

voice 1-I am your death heretic.

 

voice 2: Karul, quiet. listen.

 

voice 3:Aye, I hear it Harenta.

 

Voice 4:Eldar. It's the Eldar Youl.

 

Youl: How do you know Leanardo?

 

Leanardo: The screams. listen. Wait.

Karul! Cover the hallway, they approach!

 

Karul: understood. See anything Harenta.

 

Harenta: Aye, About 6 Battalions worth of Guardians, 3 Battalions of Swooping Hawks, Striking Scorpions, and Dire Avengers. We also have a seer council

a Farseer and.... Emperor help us a Avatar of Khaine and a Autarch.

 

Leanardo: Harenta! Close the door!

 

Harenta: On it!

 

END OF ACT 00

[Isador0]

Part 2

[Isador0]

Also please don't focus on names or the like. Just focus on the story and comment

[TheCalliton]

two things

1: this goes in the garden

2. dont make us download crap, for all we know it has a virus

[martinthemage]

Hmm I've never heard of a txt file with a virus... And I agree, this post should be in the garden forum.

[martinthemage]

(can't find the edit button) I like how their names are only revealed when the character's say eachother's names. It's like when you're watching a movie: you only know the character's names after they are mentioned.

[Isador0]

Moved it. didn't see Garden forum.