Isador0 Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 ACT 00 PROLOGUE: THE FOUR They approach. They are Death. They are the............................................................................... Monitors active gas traps.... active turrets active lockdown................... broken audio activerecording [assault cannons firing] voice 1-I am your death heretic. voice 2: Karul, quiet. listen. voice 3:Aye, I hear it Harenta. Voice 4:Eldar. It's the Eldar Youl. Youl: How do you know Leanardo? Leanardo: The screams. listen. Wait.Karul! Cover the hallway, they approach! Karul: understood. See anything Harenta. Harenta: Aye, About 6 Battalions worth of Guardians, 3 Battalions of Swooping Hawks, Striking Scorpions, and Dire Avengers. We also have a seer councila Farseer and.... Emperor help us a Avatar of Khaine and a Autarch. Leanardo: Harenta! Close the door! Harenta: On it! END OF ACT 00 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Isador0 Posted December 20, 2010 Author Share Posted December 20, 2010 ACT 2: A NEW FOE [shuriken fire pings off the door.][A Executioner is thrust through the door barely missing Harenta.] Harenta: Too close. Youl: How about a way out? Leanardo: The terminal says there's five exits. However two are blocked by rubble. Another two are guarded by Eldar Grav Tanks. The last has no blockages. There's poison gas but that's it. Harenta:Strange, Eldar could traverse that easily, we're not the only one with helmets. Youl: We should be cautious. Karul:nothing living can beat my guns. Harenta: Karul, your pride might kill you at this rate. You're not invincible. Wait did you hear that? Youl: Yes,It came from beneath us. From a air vent. Leanardo: Everyone run! Karul: are you afraid Leanardo? Leanardo: Karul, you will be the.... [the vents burst. spewing forth hordes of Tyranids] Leanardo: RUN!!!! [The squad retreated, chased by hundreds of Rippers, Hormagaunts, andTermagants.] ACT 2B RESPITE[They fled into the Armory and shut the door.] Karul: Explanations now! Leanardo: I'll explain, just get a torch! Karul: Fine! Leanardo: Harenta! Youl! Hold the door while Karul and I seal the door! Harenta and Youl: On it. [five minutes later] Karul: Leanardo. Leanardo: They're Tyranids. Devourers of worlds. We don't have time for discussion. Harenta! Anything useful? Harenta: yes, proximity mines and a exit. The exit leads to a minor hive and ends up about 50 miles south of the exit sir. Leanardo: Harenta, lay the mines and return. As the most knowledgeable about the foe you're point-man. Everyone else grab a flamer. [five minutes later the mines are laid.]Harenta: I also found a bolter with hellfire shells. Anyway lets go. [The four jumped into a tunnel and marched into the hive] ACT 3 THE HIVE AND A NOTABLE DISCOVERY. Karul: Burn Xenos! Harenta: Focus fire..... Now! [With Harenta's leadership the team burned the hive and it's Tyrant into ashes] Harenta: What's this? A door? [They enter and are ambushed by a figure in golden power armor.] Figure: Who are you to enter Galen Theren's realm?! Karul: We are Angels of Death. Mocker of Space Marines. Galen: Mocker? Mocker! You have spirit, Karul of the Black Templars!As do you: Youl of the Salamanders, Leanardo of the Blood Angels and Harenta of the Dark Angels Deathwatch. In the name of the Emperor I bid you welcome. END OF ACT 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Isador0 Posted December 20, 2010 Author Share Posted December 20, 2010 Also please don't judge harshly this is my first story of the type.Don't focus on names, focus on the story.I'm taking requests for part 4. And of course advice is welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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