RamenAwesome Posted March 23, 2011 Author Share Posted March 23, 2011 Here we go! One genuine banter for Rynnfox!This is supposed to be between Yiyeni and a Human Warden who has begun to show interest in her. I've written some little notes that I hope will help you when you record these lines. All you have to do is read Yiyeni's lines and attach them to a post. Feel free to ad-lib a little if you need to, whatever helps you keep it sounding natural. Try both of the accents that we talked about. Also, I think its really important that you keep in mind how Yiyeni's tone changes throughout this scene. Remember that Yiyeni is normally very confident (even cocky) and is always sure her beliefs, but also that by the end she stumbles around awkwardly, almost to the point of babbling. Setting: Party Campsite(Conversation starts) Yiyeni: You need something from me?Warden: Can we discuss something personal?Yiyeni: (jokingly) Personal? Yikes! That sounds ominous!Warden: I wanted to make sure you were settling in alright.Yiyeni: Well enough I suppose. I must admit you've got some colorful companions following you around.Yiyeni: (light-hearted) I can't imagine how you cater to all of them.Warden: Hmph... It's harder than it looks Yiyeni.Yiyeni: (giggling) I'll bet! They can be so funny though! Some of them even remind me of-... (suddenly disheartened) people I used to know.Warden: You must miss the Dalish.Yiyeni: (sadly) I remember them… I remember their faces. Merrill, Fenaryil…and Keeper Marethari. I miss them terribly.Yiyeni: (awkwardly trying to change the subject) Ugh, I’m sorry I’m getting distracted aren’t I? I should be focused on the blight, on helping you.Warden: It’s okay if you’re homesick. I understand.Yiyeni: (thankful) I know you do. It’s just that…(concerned) I don’t want you worrying about me.Warden: But I do worry about you. I care about you.Yiyeni: (startled) Umm…you do?Yiyeni: (awkward) I…I just…this is a little awkward.Yiyeni: What I mean is...(sighs)…I’m an elf. Not just an elf, I’m one of the Dalish! And…you’re…not.Warden: I know that.Yiyeni: (embarrassed) I-it’s not like that’s a bad thing…(almost inaudible)…I mean, I don’t think it is…Yiyeni: (unsure) I don’t know. I just don’t know. You have been so good to me…Yiyeni: (retreating) I need to think about this. I’m sorry but I-…please excuse me. (Conversation ends) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenweelessar Posted April 4, 2011 Share Posted April 4, 2011 Hey, is there anything i can do to help? And in my last comment i meant that if you play as a male(was wrong there) there are no dalish elf companions to romance which means that you can't romance anyone if you want to keep to be a "true" dalish.(because if you romance a human you will be cast out of your clan...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RamenAwesome Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 Ah! I see your point now. But in my mind I figured that the Dalish character wouldn't care because she already has near zero chance of seeing her clan again. And as for your offer to help, of course! Was there something in specific that you wanted to work on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenweelessar Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 Hmm, is there anything in particular you need help with? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meneldur Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 Hey i´d like to sign up as voice actor and/or text writer (dialog or banter)Should the mage be Fereldan and talk like an englishmen or is he from somewhere else, because i´m able to speak either english dialect or pretty much clean english since i was raised bilingual, and learned the clean one at school here in austria Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RamenAwesome Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 To LenweelessarWell I definitely need someone who has enough experience with the toolset to build the mod, someone who knows how to insert the character into the game and consolidate all the audio and video files. I also could always use another writer, as not many people have expressed interest in writing the script. Lastly, although this isn't really a job, I need people to get the word out about this project, to attract other modders (I don't have many associations sadly...) To MeneldurManasus is native to Fereldan so he would speak in and english/american accent. If you want to voice act him, I can write you something to read and record. If you want to be a scriptwriter, than create some form of conversation involving Manasus (such as a banter or maybe an argument between the warden and Manasus). If you need an idea of how Manasus would react to a situation I posted some scenarios involving him in my original post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenweelessar Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 Well, i have big interest in being a writer. I have some good ideas it's just the thing that the toolset and i never were the best friends.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenweelessar Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 I gotta ask what Yiyeni thinks of humans? It's a good thing to know. Lenwe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meneldur Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 I have an idea for a banter between Manasus and StenAs you know, Qunari Mages are kept on leashes and their holders also responsible for oppressing the growth of their magical power (If you have played DA 2 then you know how terrified Qunari are of the idea of freeing mages)So Sten might disapprove of a Mage who ran away from his "holder" Sten: Did I understand right that the warden is your new Arvaarad?Manasus: What do you mean by that? I don´t even know how to spell this word...Sten: The one who holds back your evilManasus: Same Question...Sten: Your Power, your curse, that which makes you a danger to everyoneManasus: Oh! You mean Magic! Why would we need that?Sten: You´re out of one of these circles you humans have... Shouldn´t there be someone to control your powers?Manasus: I don´t need a bloody templar in my neck all the time! I can do that on my own!Sten: You´re Sarebaas, a corrupted one too!(In refference to his beeing a bloodmage) You should not be allowed to be alone anywhere you go!Manasus: I can control Bloodmagic! I am careful when consulting demons!(If Alistair is in Party) Alistair: Sten, I´m a templar, doesn´t this satisfie you?(Regardless of Alistair) Sten: Pasherra, you Humans are so careless! Remember this Baas! I will keep an eye on you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meneldur Posted April 7, 2011 Share Posted April 7, 2011 @Lenwe: i think as she grew up amongst the Dalish, she was raised to dislike, if not hate Humans in generell, but she can change her attitude when you convince her that not all humen are arses Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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