Bloodhorn's Poem Project (Need Help)

[GenBloodhorn]

My Linguistics professor told me to write a poem about language as my project for the whole semester.
I want to be unique and use several foreign languages for it.

Here is the thing, I need people to translate one of these stanzas into their language.
It doesn't have to be exactly the same; Just need a good translation.
Languages that use the Alphabet must rhyme :wink:

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A.

The English language that secured its mass,

Caused unity until it became a country or steel and brass;

The world is chaotic without language,

And life will have no meaning without language,

I will get help with the use of language

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The [Your language name] that secured its mass/people.
Cause unity until it became a country of _____;
The world is chaotic without language,
and life will have no meaning without language,
I will get help with the use of language.

---OR----

B.

The English language secured its people's history,

The one source of its people's unity,

Without language, the world would be disastrous,

and life will simply be blasphemous,

Language shall help me for it is not so cancerous.

@@@TO@@@

The [Your Language name] secured its people's history,
The one source of its people's unity,
Without language, the world would be disastrous

and life will simply be blasphemous,

Language shall help me for it is not so cancerous.

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They almost mean the same.
If you think my rhymes are bad and you speak English better,
I will gladly accept help.

An Example is a Filipino version of the stanza:

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Ang Wikang Filipino na nag taguyod sa bayan,

Nagdulot ng pag kakaisa hanggat itoy naging bansa ng mga bayani.

Magulo ang mundo kapag walang wika,

at ang buhay ay mawawalan ng diwa,

sa tulong wika, ang tulong ay aking makukuha.

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The message I need to get is:

1 This Language is what sustained this country
2 This Language caused its people to be one
3 The world is out of control without language
4 And will have no sense without it
5 (I will get help with the use of language) or (I helped with the use of language)

PS It doesn't have to have the same rhyme scheme or metre (if there's any metre in it).

Edited August 12, 2015 by GenBloodhorn

[JustATac0]

Faal Dovahzul tinvok kogur niil joriinro usnutiid, gein leytah do niil joriinro pahgein, Vothni tinvok, lein fund kos disastrousand laas fen simply kos blasphemous, Tinvok fent hiif zey fah nii los ni ful dunarandkei.

 

 

Language: Dovahzul

Stanza: B

[GenBloodhorn]

-snip-

 

Language: Dovahzul

Stanza: B

wow, now thats interesting, thx