A story of a young man rising to the top

[Windfireknight]

story canceled Edited September 26, 2011 by Windfireknight

[LordWushin]

I like the story. Need some spelling and grammar but I would love to have more to read. Great job!

[Windfireknight]

I like the story. Need some spelling and grammar but I would love to have more to read. Great job!

Thx wushin if you'd like could you desribe what you see as image from the story and the way its written

[Windfireknight]

from now on i shall edit the first post with the story for easyer reading Edited September 2, 2011 by Windfireknight

[MaverickMcoy]

Very good Story, like they said Grammar needs Improvement but still enjoyed the story, hope to see more. :ninja:

[Windfireknight]

out of m inspiration got to play some luminous arc to get ïnspiration"