A Requiem of Death

[Kuraikiba]

A Requiem of Death

 

Cerulean spatters, crystal shatters

As it hits the ground of bones and ashes scatter

Like meteors falling from a Viridian sky

Gentle winds whistle ethereal tunes on a vernal night

 

I'm always calling and always falling in this ebony meadow

I watch the ivory stars through a betwixt window

Of love, truth, longsuffering and life

Every rose has a thorn and a razor like a amaranthine knife

 

I wait, called by a requiem of death

But I still stay, surrounded by a thousand emerald blades of grass

As I watch a million shooting star and comets fly over me

Beautiful whistling saccharine moonstone bells in harmony

 

As fires blaze inside, and time has left me to die

On this glassy field on lie

In time, in time, it all just passes by

And when I come to pass and say goodbye

The ghostly amethyst moon sinks in the sky

And the last thing I will remember is a smile

As my life and stars just leaves my soul for a while

[LordWushin]

Very good! I feel as tho it was made from the heart, touching mine!

[Kuraikiba]

Yep. It's sort of the twin to Ngora, Star of the Void (Another great poem of mine, lower in the page).

 

It's about a man who is on the final minutes of his life, and he lies in a meadow, not reflecting on his life, but rather

watching the incredible beauty of earth in a comet and meteor shower, which lights up the skies and the auroras,

making them gleam and flash and sparkle the most amazingly beautiful colors he had ever seen. Not worrying about

the final moments, as his body slowly started dying, and life was leaving him slowly, he felt just an incredible happiness

as he watched the most beautiful display of the heavens ever seen, and as he breathed his last breath, he simply shed

tears of joy, and experienced the truest happiness a human being could have.

 

I would like feedback on a similar subject to this as well. I am a book writer (yes, I wrote my first when I was ten) but my

first decent book was made when I was about 17, which is a romantic epic called the Florentine Sniper, but I'm not going

to post that as it is too long and, even though very toned down on almost everything, I am not sure if the admins might take

it as NSFW because I used very intense verbal, but not drawn, visuals concerning violence. I'd have to check with an admin.

 

I digress. I meant to state that I am planning on writing a new book, and I'd like to know if people here think I should bother

with the effort.

[LordWushin]

I think you should! If it is anything like your poems, you will do great!

[Kuraikiba]

Well, my FIRST serious one was, the next is going to be a little darker.

[Keanumoreira]

Another great piece.

[Kuraikiba]

I try my best to please. :)

[Flintlockecole]

Dark writing is good writing lol. Me think's the book mod could use an update sooner or later. Edited June 21, 2011 by Flintlockecole

[Kuraikiba]

You got that write. :P