Fatal Error

[Skyviper086]

Well with recent events of a mod site closing its doors. I think I am now free to talk about this project. For now I'm looking for input while I'm writing the story.

 

The story is about a person whose memories have been altered and placed inside of a clone. Here's the opening dialogue that I have so far. I do apologize that it's line by line but there isn't a way for me to post a box.

 

1. There is no instance of a nation benefiting from prolonged warfare.
2. Those words were written thousands of years ago by Sun Tzu, a Chinese General and philosopher.
3. Humans cannot live without war…just as they can’t live without food, water, and oxygen.
4. Their reasons for war are always different.
5. But the results remain the same.
6. The rich become richer and the poor die with false hopes.
7. Over time … technology has allowed the elite class to develop the perfect solider. One that would follow them.
8. Unquestionably.
9. At first they used Multi Role Attack Drones or m rads.
10. These could be deployed anywhere in the world to end a conflict or to execute private agendas. Eventually they became too expensive to use.
11. So they turned to the ancient art of cloning.
12. And behind closed doors, of an undisclosed base; they began their work on human samples.
13. Sadly… their greed, and twisted ambitions, blinded them from seeing the line they crossed.
14. In a short amount of time they finally had their perfect soldier.
15. However … with all things rushed and guided by greed there will always be a flaw.
16. We understood their objectives clearly… but we were not as stupid as they hoped we would be.
17. Their first mistake was letting their own greedy pursuits blind them.
18. The second was giving us life.
19. And sending the m rads to kill us … was their final and most fatal error.

 

So Fatal Error will be centered around one unit as it tries to escape a facility and then eventually enter the real world.

 

The story is being tweaked to work with Fallout 4. I was wanting it be used for FNV at the time of writing this but well FO4 beat me to it.

 

And I'm glad it did. The Synths from the institute will work nicely as enemies or allies with this story. Keep in mind when I wrote this I had no idea about the story line for Fallout 4. None. And I can see a lot of this story working it just needs some tweaks and I'm open to any opinions and suggestions people may have.

I was actually looking into making this an independent project, like my own game kind of thing. But realistically speaking. I can't mod that well. I like to write stories though so maybe I can make this an audio resource once I'm done writing the script.