Keanumoreira Posted November 10, 2011 Share Posted November 10, 2011 Faster than a bullet, thinner than a dime,Sooner beneath the surface, swiftly out of time.Pockets of your life, so quick to slip away,No hands to grasp or hold them, no words to even say. A weight is pressing down, like an icy iron fist,To struggle is a compliment, but it simply must insist.Your heart pleas to negotiate, the pistons crank in place,The hand is clinching fast, but who will win the race? The light is fleeting out, the fingers sealing shut,Can you feel it tug your feet as it pulls you to its gut?What is there to do, who will hear your call,Can anybody save you from Poseidon’s gaping maw? Death’s the one to answer, he seeks a heart-to-heart,He’s here to do the deal, he’s here to play his part.There will be no escape, all debts are in their date,Make sure to bear a smile, when he comes to seal your fate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tokyobiohazard Posted November 10, 2011 Share Posted November 10, 2011 Oh my gosh, Keanu! That was epic! ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AurianaValoria1 Posted November 10, 2011 Share Posted November 10, 2011 Excellent! Wonderful writing, Keanu! :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted November 14, 2011 Author Share Posted November 14, 2011 Thanks guys. :happy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeRyan Posted November 14, 2011 Share Posted November 14, 2011 (edited) excellent writing my dear brother! (inside joke that brother part :P) I salute thee and thy writing! Edited November 14, 2011 by MikeRyan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keanumoreira Posted November 16, 2011 Author Share Posted November 16, 2011 excellent writing my dear brother! (inside joke that brother part :P) I salute thee and thy writing! Such kindness brother. I shall send some mead your way. Just as soon as I get the dragon stables under control... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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