AdamNeko Posted February 12, 2004 Share Posted February 12, 2004 I know it's not like me to be depressed for anything stupid like this, but I ended up writing a really sad poem for my girlfriend earlier this week. Figured you guys might like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malchik Posted February 12, 2004 Share Posted February 12, 2004 So - what did she say? Suggested response from said girlfriend: Adam Neko, you chump, do you not realiseOnly I can see you, as I do, through my eyes.If anyone's perfect then I've never met themand so hard to live with I'd want to forget them.And maybe you aren't quite the moon and the sunBut Adam, believe me please, you are the one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breton Thief Oriana Posted February 12, 2004 Share Posted February 12, 2004 wow, cool, man. but you should have waited until after valentines day at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdamNeko Posted February 12, 2004 Author Share Posted February 12, 2004 Guess I need to explain the situation behind it then.What had happened the original day, was I'd made a total jackass of myself in front of one of our friends and I did rather end up being pretty upset and depressed about it. I ended up writing that poem to express myself at to how I felt, and as Malchik did respond, she verily answered as such, but not in poem.And yeah, I felt better about myself after that response Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breton Thief Oriana Posted February 12, 2004 Share Posted February 12, 2004 Alrighty then. This should go out to all the people writing poems with depth of personal meaning: allways include some reasons for why you write. I write my poems as a cry to open eyes aggainst oppression, corruption, hippocrisy, etc., but mine you can tell that from the poem. In yours, I only thought you wrote it just becaue, and gave it to her for the same reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdamNeko Posted February 12, 2004 Author Share Posted February 12, 2004 IN a way, though, Malchik's probably had a feeling of what I was like from my previous posts. You'd have to read them to understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breton Thief Oriana Posted February 12, 2004 Share Posted February 12, 2004 yeah, but malchik is more intelegent than me (I assume). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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