Love

[Herculine]

Thanks for the compliments, all. But I'm not trying to upstage Dezdimona or hijack her thread. Not that I think anyone is saying that, just that I felt the need to say something. I'm just a noob who happened across some really wonderful people here. Dezdimona is my inspiration and the true artist here.

[dezdimona]

I think about

You, night and

Day

 

Your sexy smile

Seems to brighten

My way

 

I think of

Us together at

Play

 

Your eyes ablaze

Your hips that

Sway

 

Your on my

Mind when your

Away

 

It makes for

A sad and

Lonely day

 

I can still

Smell your sweet

Perfume

 

Oh how that

Fragrance fills a

Room

 

I love how

You tease and

Tantalize

 

The look of

The devil alive

In your dark

Eyes

 

The way you

Giggle when I

Kiss your sweet

Neck

 

The touch of

Your fingers on

My nipples so

Erect

 

You fill my

Dreams and waking

Hours too

 

How I yearn

To make passionate

Love just to

You

 

To touch your

Hair, your neck,

Your face

 

Your style, your

Charm, your tender

Embrace

 

Into my arms

You do gently

Glide

 

How I crave

To be at

Your side

 

Take me away

And never do

Us part

 

Just be my

Love and end

This ache in

My heart.

 

The Chronicles of Sticks

[LordTenaim]

Wonderful Dezi.

 

Why is it painful

when you go.

what have I done

why did you go

Is love conditional

Is it unconditional

all I know is to loose you

is pain beyond all.

[Herculine]

Rhyme in poetry?

Seriously, I could feel emotions coming from both of the above poems. That's what I believe poetry is all about.

Wonderful poems, both of you.

[Fifoo]

Your poems are like a symphony

words are playing together

they blow away near secret places

where beauty and love reigns

and we are on your knees

admiring this marvelous scene

in hope of never ending times...

 

Thank you, sweet great Lady :thumbsup:

[dezdimona]

Your poems are like a symphony

words are playing together

they blow away near secret places

where beauty and love reigns

and we are on your knees

admiring this marvelous scene

in hope of never ending times...

 

Thank you, sweet great Lady :thumbsup:

I thank you for the tribute.