Looking for some feedback on a song i made :]

[ThatGuyx]

Looking for some feedback on this, so If you'd like, give it a listen and tell me what you think?[:

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3K5S1ys_smU&feature=plcp

[Vagrant0]

I'm no expert, but something about it just doesn't sound right. It's like the drums are off tempo or there's just nothing to really establish a melody. It's like you're trying to do two completely different styles of music with the drums and bass feeling a little sluggish, but the chip sounds and other effects jumping in to try and start something, but with no follow through.

 

I guess I'm not much for dubstep.