Blacksnake89 Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 My family is very gifted artistically mainly with words. I myself am a writer. I've written a few poems over the years as well. I'm not the poet in the family my cousin Aubrey is I write stories. I could write a story so convincing I could put an innocent man to death row, lol not really. I'm making this thread to post my stories and poems I'll be updating it fairly regularly. If you like my work leave me a comment hell leave me one if you hate it. If you really like my stuff leave me a kudos :thumbsup: Here's my post Sanctuary of Shadows Lies and deceit Rage and pain Demons from within Pull you under Fractured memories of a fractured mind A sanctuary hidden in shadows A paradise of serenity A place were you can hide from yourself Were you can hide from your inner demons A hidden blessing Hidden in yourself My sanctuary Hidden in shadows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blacksnake89 Posted July 19, 2008 Author Share Posted July 19, 2008 Here's post 2 The Truth? What can't lie? Does death tell the truth? Or does it just make more questions? Does life tell the truth? Or does it make you question yourself? Does a drunk tell the truth? Or do they just tell what their thinking? How about a bullet?or music?Books? No they all lie too The law lies, your family ,your friend,your oun thoughts and soul can and will lie to you. If no one and nothing tells the truth then what can't lie? The only thing that can't lie is time. More comming tomarrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 I like! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blacksnake89 Posted July 20, 2008 Author Share Posted July 20, 2008 Post number 3 one of my favorites. Heroes What is a hero?Is it someone you follow?or look up to?Does a hero lead you to salvation?or can they lead you to destruction?If you follow are you weak?or does it take more strength to follow?to devote yourself to a cause you don't understand.Do the powerless have power? Do the powerful have anything?Or is power just an illusion man uses to measure their worth?can you have nothing and still have more power than someone with everything?Can you have everything and still have nothing? I read this at my highschool graduation a lot of people loved it.I'm glad you like them Dezi more are comming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 20, 2008 Share Posted July 20, 2008 The last one shows true dilemma. It asks many questions but leaves the answers up to the reader.Very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blacksnake89 Posted July 21, 2008 Author Share Posted July 21, 2008 The last one shows true dilemma. It asks many questions but leaves the answers up to the reader.Very nice!I wrote that freshman year of high school for an English class. Took me about 10 minutes to think up and write. My teacher thought it was good but gave me a C only because it of how little time it took to write it. I was so pissed I wrote a 4 page essay about how I thought her grading methods were complete bullsh*t. She gave the essay a B :) My most current writing I'm doing is an essay about how certain gun control laws should be lifted. Specifically how the age limit for carrying a handgun should be reduced from 21 to 18. It's a cause I do actually believe in but I'm writing it for selfish reasons :wink: I'm basing a large ammount of my arguement on how when Austrailia increased their gun control laws their crime rate shot up 70%. It's getting pretty time consuming and I've had little time for fun or poetry. Hell I don't even think it'll make a difference but to me it's worth trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blacksnake89 Posted July 21, 2008 Author Share Posted July 21, 2008 Found a little sucker hidden in the back on one of my journals this one is Meet the monster I feel the evil from within.Clawing at the back of my mind.I hold in my urges.I suppress the demon. I look in the mirror.I see what lies ahead.I drop to my knees.I lose my control.A scream echoes in my head.My ears are bleeding terror.It’s time you met the monster.It’s time you met my vengeance. This poem unlike my others is about something specific try to figure what the monster is. This is also a slightly modified version. I modified it so it doesn't scream what it's about. I'm sure people have noticed my sig has changed again. I sometimes like to take lyrics I think describe me and I can't believe I forgot about this song. This WILL be a permanent part of my sig. I modified one word in the lyrics. The song is What it's like by everlast. If you're reading this listen to the song you will love it. Lyrics here http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/Wha...82568BD0024BCEB video posted right here. Warning video does have some cussing click play at your own discresion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 21, 2008 Share Posted July 21, 2008 very cool stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blacksnake89 Posted July 27, 2008 Author Share Posted July 27, 2008 Revised version of meet the monster Meet the monster I feel the evil from within.Clawing at the back of my mind.I hold in my urges.I suppress the demon. I look in the mirror.I see what lies ahead.I drop to my knees.I lose my control.A scream echoes in my head.My ears are bleeding terror.It’s time you met the monster.It’s time you met the addiction. Well there you go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 27, 2008 Share Posted July 27, 2008 Revised version of meet the monster Meet the monster I feel the evil from within.Clawing at the back of my mind.I hold in my urges.I suppress the demon. I look in the mirror.I see what lies ahead.I drop to my knees.I lose my control.A scream echoes in my head.My ears are bleeding terror.It’s time you met the monster.It’s time you met the addiction. Well there you go.We all have our own private monsters to deal with. Its only when we refuse to face them,or let them control our lives that we are truely helpless! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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