reaper13 Posted July 21, 2008 Share Posted July 21, 2008 i've started Writing storys for my character, wildfire. please read and tell me what you think read this firsthttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/4370765/1/wildfires_begining read this Second http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4397076/1/shades_awaking read this thirdhttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/4379724/1/wildfires_revenge read this Fourthhttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/4405551/1/reunion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephanie Posted July 22, 2008 Share Posted July 22, 2008 Good start. You need more character development and description. What you've written looks like an outline for a story ... :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reaper13 Posted July 22, 2008 Author Share Posted July 22, 2008 to see what wildfire and shade look like go to http://www.tesnexus.com/modules/members/index.php?id=659645and look at the pictures i posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerin Morth Posted July 23, 2008 Share Posted July 23, 2008 My advice would be to combine them all into one story, instead of one for each chapter. If you don't know how to do that, I can tell you. Just PM me either here or on FF.net, my name is the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reaper13 Posted July 23, 2008 Author Share Posted July 23, 2008 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4417044/1/the_werewolf warring this is a violent story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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