Nightmare

[MyDogsTale]

So, a few days ago i woke up from a horrible nightmare, i grabbed a pen and wrote down what i dreamed...i didn't think it was that good, but im considering to put it at use in one of the black metal/hardcore bands im playing in...

what do you think...would it fit...and what do you think generally? :huh:

 

 

Nightmare:

 

The bombs fell

Soon after the swarm came

Tidalwaves of men leaving rivers and seas of blood

Bullets dancing a death ballet

Caressing the carcass

 

Children grinning to the ground

Powerfull leaders turning their face away

Evil tounges that dispences lies

Ghosts that seekes a past so far away

into the light they won't go

 

And when all was lost around me...

What could i do but to tear my eyes out

Because all that was beautiful was lost around me

And every thing i knew was torn to the ground

So I seeked theese things within me...