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lynix112

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Hey there guys just looking for some good feedback for me dwemer dungeon design I haven't worked with the creation kit before and my training only consists of internet tutorials so please be gentle.

 

Please note this dwemer dungeon is not a ruin, it is supposed to be in tact as part of quest lore. It is about 1/8th completed and will be much larger when it's finished. What I am looking for here is how I could improve my design and/or get a better 'ambient feel' to the dungeon.

 

http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/600107_423944047647217_1486555134_n.jpg

 

http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/s720x720/533022_423944074313881_662279716_n.jpg

 

http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/313665_423944087647213_1869852074_n.jpg

 

All feedback is appreciated!

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So far I get a feeling that its not a dungeon. More like inside of a gigant movable fortress like "Tianlei". But looks amazing so far. You thinking about putting some special effects there?
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Still looking for some feedback on this one.

 

Here's an updated version of the above

 

http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/417310_424094274298861_18461477_n.jpg

 

http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/484622_424094297632192_768730391_n.jpg

 

So the reason I'm looking for some feedback is because my mod isn't just another mod it is an incredibly large mod with 30 quests. and 13 dungeons (Mostly dwarven). I'm pushing for roughly 10 hours game play minimum so I want it to look really incredible too.

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Kinda reminds me of Morrowind. Wouldn't mind seeing some lava under that bridge. Everything looks great so far.

 

Morrowind is what I am going for. I loved dwarven ruins in morrowind and was really excited to see them come back in skyrim and then you could hardly tell they were dwarven at all. I was sad when this happened. I have added a lot more since these screenshots were taken and the first version should be ready in the next few days for testing which will feature 1 fully complete dungeon and a few books that will teach you how to craft some really nice dwarven armor made from a new type of dwarven metal.

 

I'm really hoping people like the first dungeon as I'm counting on it to set the tone for my entire mod.

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