tyreil829 Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 i was tormented by the devil tossed around be the fiend lost my soul once again and fought to set it freewatching my brother fall from the frountlines burns a scar that not even a witch could findi died twice and reborn once one life to live one life to lostno second chances no reload one life he given one life he lost what he lost was not telled in tale but he hasn't won the right to be with the failed no second chances no reload one life he given one life he lost in honor of Tim Davies ( Rodney Mckay) and my brother Simon Casey ( RIP) DCasey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 very nice Duncan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyreil829 Posted September 26, 2008 Author Share Posted September 26, 2008 and you though i couldn't do poems... Sheppard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabya123 Posted October 4, 2008 Share Posted October 4, 2008 nice poem with sorrow and pain like the desert with out rain no trees , no bushes, only scars of bleeding pain . :ermm: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gandalftw Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 Speaks quite well of the horror of war and the terrible injury done to those left to mourn the fallen.Sorry for your loss,Tyreil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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