jaysus Posted October 17, 2008 Share Posted October 17, 2008 i like em too tho the cat has one rhime out of linebut its good to see someone does still make verbal winewithout rapping bout whores drugs and platinum shinejust a pity its not mine... :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DracoRazgriz Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 Ok here's another one I wrote awhile back, however due to the fact it's Veterans Day tomorrow I thought I'd put it up, Just my way of saying thanks for serving our wonderful country(s). Now, I don't think it's all that good IMO.......but it's the best I can do on short notice. - Raz. Combat Combat is a duel between warriors elite. Transfixed by glare and bone shattering force. Pulling yourself together and fighting along with the rush. Looking down on your opponent with frightened glee and thinking only of your family. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 I like your poetry,you have depth and and a sence of passion in all of them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pedantic Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 A lot of thought in just a few words, cat one made me grin. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 Wow! There great Raz! Well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wasder Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 Excellent! Really enjoyed them. You have a talent for it, definately (but I'm not exactly an expert). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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