spyro1201 Posted October 29, 2008 Share Posted October 29, 2008 Have a good read and please tell me what you guys think Chapter 1Chapter 2Chapter 3Chapter 4Chapter 5Enjoy! the story isn't finished yet.But i will finish it though :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted October 30, 2008 Share Posted October 30, 2008 very nice,good characters,action,suspense...stay at it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spyro1201 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Share Posted October 30, 2008 thanks dezi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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