armageddon818 Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 You signed off, here is the story:Inside the ice they dwell, a city of ice whose denizens share the pallor of the landscape. Beautiful are the people there and their city. Cool crystal abounds, the light splitting itself into diamond shards on their edges. Snow and ice rules the land and an eternal winter lays hold to the island. Only the fastest moving water escapes a rigid doom, yet the people have no thirst. They have no needs, no earthly desire for food or water or sleep. Their rest comes only as they pray to their god Feci the winged wolf and protector of the isle. Yet their prayers, and pleas for the reduction of the icy airs go unanswered, and so they pray with more vigor and zeal and determination. Since the frosts crept across the once fruitful island, a new dynasty of tyrannous rulers subjugates the people with an cold and unmerciful fist. Peasants pray for forgiveness for some unknown sin, some blasphemy which has caused their patron to leave them cursed for eternity. Some beg for his forgiveness, while some wish only to be consumed by the one thing that can truly destroy them, a pure fire. Indeed the Isle of Alsiae awaits a hero, a savior which will throw off the chains of their oppression and unravel the mystery which is their punishment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XanAlderon Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 Thats the blurb of a game I'd play! How about the divine saviour of the world has been enslaved by ice, and you must find the holy fire to save him. The holy fire that once burned bright inside every mortal.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
armageddon818 Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 Hahaha thank you, um the full actual story is under the Alsiae thread, if you are interested. There is always room on the team too!!! I am going to make that blurb longer too. Anyway, thanks for the compliments!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
armageddon818 Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 Updated: Inside the ice they dwell, a city of ice whose denizens share the pallor of the landscape. Beautiful are the people there and their city. Cool crystal abounds, the light splitting itself into diamond shards on their edges. Snow and ice rules the land and an eternal winter lays hold to the island. Only the fastest moving water escapes a rigid doom, yet the people have no thirst. They have no needs, no earthly desire for food or water or sleep. Their rest comes only as they pray to their god Feci the winged wolf and protector of the isle. Yet their prayers, and pleas for the reduction of the icy airs go unanswered, and so they pray with more vigor and zeal and determination. Something is amiss in this fantastic but barren land. The traces of a once fertile and lush place lay over the land, a constant reminder to the people of their plight. Since the frosts crept across the once fruitful island, a new dynasty of tyrannous rulers subjugates the people with a cold and unmerciful fist. They rule ruthlessly and lavishly, amounting in a transcendental expenditure unmatched by any other living being. For beings devoid of innate need, their want is tremendous. Avaricious greed consumes them, their obsession is such that all forms of manipulation are tolerated, so long as nothing stands in the way for their material wealth. Something lives inside them which makes them crave incessantly, a driving desire like that of thirst. These cruel lords desire not for Feci’s forgiveness, but for the power accrued in his absence. For as long as the true god sleeps, they assume divinity. Peasants pray for forgiveness for some unknown sin, some blasphemy which has caused their patron to leave them cursed for eternity. Some beg for his forgiveness, while some wish only to be consumed by the one thing that can truly destroy them, a pure fire. Indeed the Isle of Alsiae awaits a hero, a savior which will throw off the chains of their oppression and unravel the mystery which is their punishment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keylek3 Posted December 5, 2008 Author Share Posted December 5, 2008 good story i shall then add it into a book of myths to suite it. i shall start to type it up tommorow then so i shall then when it is done i shall take a pic of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keylek3 Posted December 6, 2008 Author Share Posted December 6, 2008 not going to be doing much moddeling this weekend because proplems on the pc like the microphone, so there will really not be much moddeling untill monday but i shall try my best to do some things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XanAlderon Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 I have (in my opinion) a good idea for the main story line! First you need to make a book that sounds like a really holy religious tome about the Ayelied kingdom. Then make a hermit hut somewhere in the wilderness, as well as a hermit. Make up some way for the player to get there eg. Dream, Message etc. There the hermit tells you of the fate of this land and how the great winged wolf god was sealed away by all the greed, corruption, envy and anger in this world. He shows you a sacred text about how the land begun and how to free the imprisoned god. It talks about a fierce spiritual fire that burns bright inside an outsider that is the only hope of freeing the god from his icy chains.The Hermit believes you are this hero and so sends you out to find the second section of this book which apparently tells were the god is imprisoned. Your only clue is the name of the author and so you go to the Capital city to find were this guy lived. Asking around your eventually shown a mansion in one of the districts. Going inside you find the Author surrounded by bodys, he tells you he has been ambushed by the kings elite guard, who hope to get the book and kill the god, so the king may continue his tyrannical reign. You guide the author out of the mansion battling off the guards as you go. When you get outside "the author" reveals he wasn't the author at all and instead is in employment to the king. He also reveals that the guards you have just killed are not the kings elite guard but freedom fighters trying to save the god! He says they ambushed him just after he killed the author and he had to fight them off before you appeared. The man escapes down the road just as more freedom fighters appear. After a Talk they attack you believing you to be in employment of the king and don't listen to your pleas of innocence. Forced to kill them, your in deep water now. Your enemies have the book an your Allies are trying to kill you! You head back to the hermit to find out what you should do next..... IF YOU LIKE IT MORE SOON!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
armageddon818 Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 Hmm these are all really good ideas, except this is keylek's mod, the info from mine is just some filler for some of his book. And I believe that the storyline (at least in general) is pretty determined. However, if you would like to comment on my storyline, there is a separate thread for that. Keylek's ideas a different, but i believe that he has posted them elsewhere on this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XanAlderon Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 'twas merely a suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keylek3 Posted December 7, 2008 Author Share Posted December 7, 2008 i am sorry but this quest is RUBBISH, ''a winged wolf god?'' anubis is not a winged wolf god, he is a man god like vivec but he looks human but he seems to have a strange personality like he is always calm all the time and he seems to walk slowly everywhere even if theres a battle happening around him. also a hermit and sacred text and scared fires, you are saying this like american indians and dreams, there is no way the magic of this realm [when its weakened from the oblivion gates draning energy from the waters of oblivion] and all these kings guards and allances, you have to remember they are on the edge of civil war, people hate the king and when you come along with the help of anubis he helps push the kingdom in civil war as one way of revenge at the king, so at the start there is an organiseation against the king but they have done nothing [yet]. and also you find out about this realm from eather a extreamly tall ayleid tower popping up in the middle of no-where or you get a messeage from the elder council about they need your help because a gate has opened in the middle of the council chambers. the only help i need for quests are ''sub quests'' like for examples the oblivion sub quests are like ''guilds'' and by sub quests i mean things like ''an unexpected voyage'' and like ''the collector'' they are SUB quests, quests that are NOT to do with the main quest like guilds and jobs around the place. that where i need help in quests not in the main quest. sorry for the inconviniance but thats what i ment and please do not try and go for a american indian theme, thats what i dont want try to keep to an oblivion [as the game] theme and ayleid theme and magic revering to the game and not from other sources, and finaly anubis was not worshiped as a god, he did not want to be worshiped as a god he was more of a teacher of magic and also to teach people how to live in the realm in relativly peace [there are some things of anubis what i am keeping secret because they shal be reveled in the mod] even his temple was not used as a temple to worship him but it was used as more of a collage of magic where any one can join ''rich or poor'' but they had to be powerfull with magic [these where the 30 students slautered in his temple] so pleace remember this before you wase your time wrighting something i cannot use, please stick to these things -thank you for reading- keylek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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