wasder Posted December 18, 2008 Share Posted December 18, 2008 I woke up to see the room bathed in a golden Autumn light, the window open and the curtains flapping in the breeze. Crinkled brown leaves littered the floor. I looked about; the room was obviously a hospital ward. Diagrams on the white walls, cabinets, medicines, machines; it was unmistakeable. The door was ajar, but noises from inside coould be heard, only leaves in the wind. This was when I became frightened. Why was it silent? Why had the window been open for so long? Why was I here? I realised that I had never been in hospital before. I didn't remember injuring myself. I was wearing my normal clothes. What happened? A dull thud brought me back to reality. Or was it real? The noise was followed by a soft noise, like something being dragged. Then a thump. The the noise. It sounded like distorted footsteps. I got up and peeked through the crack in th door. I froze. Limping down the corridor, a horrifying figure appeared to scan about. I thought it did, but it didn't have a face. It looked like it might have been a nurse once, but it was distorted. On leg was twisted, and the foot had been replaced by a tentacle. It's hand were claws, and it's arms were streched. But the face haunted me. If it was a face... that turned towards me... <I plan to add to the story regulary, usually once or twice a week, with a few characters. I do have a vague plot idea, and a specific ending in mind, but if you have any plot ideas please PM me.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 spooky :) Waiting for more ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted December 22, 2008 Share Posted December 22, 2008 http://img37.picoodle.com/img/img37/3/12/22/f_Stabbingm_6f0e45b.gif Only kidding honey.Great story,I like dark and spooky...love ya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wasder Posted December 22, 2008 Author Share Posted December 22, 2008 First time I've ever been called honey by someone I've never met. Actually it's the first time I've ever been called honey. Thanks you two! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pedantic Posted December 23, 2008 Share Posted December 23, 2008 You wouldn't feel comfortable if I called you 'honey', so I'll stick with - spooky! :biggrin: What a wonderfully weird start to a story. More please...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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