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Just my opinion but the shadowing on the nose needs work, she looks like she has two noses. The knee in the back seems to have too sharp of a turn for the position of the foot. The shape of the foot is off and needs work in the area of the toes. The "mistake" that you mention is the blank breasts.

 

This is an excellently done drawing and you have a true talent. I would expect to see this work on a printed page if those small errors were fixed. Your perspective seems to be dead on track and the attention to the shadowing is excellent.

 

Thanks, your the first person that actually gave me a sensible criticism. Actually, the lady used to have nipples on a seperate paper.But everytime I ask for criticism, they get distracted with the breasts.

You really helped alot. :thanks:

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http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9088/ccf1404200900000.jpg

My newest work, although isn´t perfect, it has took me a long time :biggrin:

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@D_thumb

 

the right foot is in the wrong pose... it looks like it stands on a pebble atm... you should bend it further down i assume

and give her nipples lol

nevertheless an excellent drawing for sure tho a bit creepy...

 

@Fabulance

 

try to give it more depth by adding shadows... a round stick for example cant have the same "darkness-level" everywhere... its a soft transition from one side to the other

use the full spectrum between 100% black and 100% white (or background/material colour)

give a go at some reading to learn abit about placing shadows or take a lesson or two i would assume...

the shapes are nicely done but they miss "realism" mostly due to the lack of shadows

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@Fabulance

 

try to give it more depth by adding shadows... a round stick for example cant have the same "darkness-level" everywhere... its a soft transition from one side to the other

use the full spectrum between 100% black and 100% white (or background/material colour)

give a go at some reading to learn abit about placing shadows or take a lesson or two i would assume...

the shapes are nicely done but they miss "realism" mostly due to the lack of shadow

 

Thanks for the advice jaysus, I´ll work on the shadows :thumbsup:

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@ jaysus

Once I get me a light table, I'll fix the leg, knee, etc.; background and then the nipples. ;)

 

@ fabulance

I enjoy the details you put in your work, great job.

Before working on your shadows, etc. I would suggest studying first structure and figures. I highly recommend googling Andrew Loomis Books. Especially, "Fun With Pencil". Keep it up!

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Here are some new signatures...

http://www.thepictures.us/images/t212i65rf24mozw94llp.jpg

I got some requests in a last few days...

I think I'm getting better...or at least I hope so...xD

http://www.thepictures.us/images/57lts88mime01wzn9ro.jpg

This one with zombie seems cool, but I think I should pick another font...

http://www.thepictures.us/images/l5etnkbksdoftdf2utf.jpg

Luckily, there are many mods with houses on my map, I found this little sparkling statue, and I just had to take a screenshot...

http://www.thepictures.us/images/057fncaix4r6qumpq1if.jpg

The last one was for an old friend...

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http://f.imagehost.org/0534/AaronNew.jpg

http://f.imagehost.org/0934/Azura.jpg

http://f.imagehost.org/0343/Dezi.jpg

 

Three of my new smaller sig kind.

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Here's one picture of a really low quality...I tried to fix it in photoshop....

http://www.thepictures.us/images/zdppf9g8jmbwmmwvkfh9.jpg

It's a little spooky...since I look like I'm blind...haha

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You inspired me to draw something. Took about an hour. Lost my dimensions a bit. Please be kind :blink:

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Katklaw...I must admit you're very talented, but I guess that you already know that.

Dragon's textures are beautiful, it looks very realistic and his eyes are so deep.

But, who am I to judge?

It looks awesome!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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