dthumb Posted April 14, 2009 Share Posted April 14, 2009 Just my opinion but the shadowing on the nose needs work, she looks like she has two noses. The knee in the back seems to have too sharp of a turn for the position of the foot. The shape of the foot is off and needs work in the area of the toes. The "mistake" that you mention is the blank breasts. This is an excellently done drawing and you have a true talent. I would expect to see this work on a printed page if those small errors were fixed. Your perspective seems to be dead on track and the attention to the shadowing is excellent. Thanks, your the first person that actually gave me a sensible criticism. Actually, the lady used to have nipples on a seperate paper.But everytime I ask for criticism, they get distracted with the breasts.You really helped alot. :thanks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fabulance Posted April 14, 2009 Share Posted April 14, 2009 http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9088/ccf1404200900000.jpgMy newest work, although isn´t perfect, it has took me a long time :biggrin: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaysus Posted April 15, 2009 Share Posted April 15, 2009 @D_thumb the right foot is in the wrong pose... it looks like it stands on a pebble atm... you should bend it further down i assumeand give her nipples lolnevertheless an excellent drawing for sure tho a bit creepy... @Fabulance try to give it more depth by adding shadows... a round stick for example cant have the same "darkness-level" everywhere... its a soft transition from one side to the otheruse the full spectrum between 100% black and 100% white (or background/material colour)give a go at some reading to learn abit about placing shadows or take a lesson or two i would assume... the shapes are nicely done but they miss "realism" mostly due to the lack of shadows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fabulance Posted April 15, 2009 Share Posted April 15, 2009 @Fabulance try to give it more depth by adding shadows... a round stick for example cant have the same "darkness-level" everywhere... its a soft transition from one side to the otheruse the full spectrum between 100% black and 100% white (or background/material colour)give a go at some reading to learn abit about placing shadows or take a lesson or two i would assume...the shapes are nicely done but they miss "realism" mostly due to the lack of shadow Thanks for the advice jaysus, I´ll work on the shadows :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dthumb Posted April 16, 2009 Share Posted April 16, 2009 @ jaysusOnce I get me a light table, I'll fix the leg, knee, etc.; background and then the nipples. ;) @ fabulanceI enjoy the details you put in your work, great job.Before working on your shadows, etc. I would suggest studying first structure and figures. I highly recommend googling Andrew Loomis Books. Especially, "Fun With Pencil". Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Azura Posted April 16, 2009 Author Share Posted April 16, 2009 Here are some new signatures...http://www.thepictures.us/images/t212i65rf24mozw94llp.jpgI got some requests in a last few days...I think I'm getting better...or at least I hope so...xDhttp://www.thepictures.us/images/57lts88mime01wzn9ro.jpgThis one with zombie seems cool, but I think I should pick another font...http://www.thepictures.us/images/l5etnkbksdoftdf2utf.jpgLuckily, there are many mods with houses on my map, I found this little sparkling statue, and I just had to take a screenshot...http://www.thepictures.us/images/057fncaix4r6qumpq1if.jpgThe last one was for an old friend... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted April 16, 2009 Share Posted April 16, 2009 http://f.imagehost.org/0534/AaronNew.jpghttp://f.imagehost.org/0934/Azura.jpghttp://f.imagehost.org/0343/Dezi.jpg Three of my new smaller sig kind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Azura Posted April 18, 2009 Author Share Posted April 18, 2009 Here's one picture of a really low quality...I tried to fix it in photoshop....http://www.thepictures.us/images/zdppf9g8jmbwmmwvkfh9.jpgIt's a little spooky...since I look like I'm blind...haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katklaw Posted April 19, 2009 Share Posted April 19, 2009 You inspired me to draw something. Took about an hour. Lost my dimensions a bit. Please be kind :blink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Azura Posted April 19, 2009 Author Share Posted April 19, 2009 Katklaw...I must admit you're very talented, but I guess that you already know that.Dragon's textures are beautiful, it looks very realistic and his eyes are so deep.But, who am I to judge?It looks awesome! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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