The Wraithlands WIP

[DragonReaperKing]

this is from Marco808 from morroblivion.com link here http://morroblivion.com/forums/skyrim/skywind-mod-releases/4549 hey everyone i am working on a new mod called The Wraithlands its about a dark land once ruled by the wraiths and thier leader lerken untel 3 three young heros there names are mordis the wise rothgar stealblade and scales the assassin came to the wraithlands to help the lands and swore an oath to destroy lerken and his minions and formed the Great crusade and after two years of gaining allis they finally pushed back at lerkens fortress and as they arived lerkens secend in command soultron came out of the dark fortress and told them to surrender and no one would be harmed but they rufuesd the offer and as soultron opened the gate a giant army of undead comes out but the crusade remaned strong then Rothgar sends scales to attack from inside and scales gos while rothgar and mordis fight the undead then soultron fires the souleater a power device that asorbs souls with a powerful blast a lot of men died in the blast but they keept fighting and finally rothgar and mordis got inside the fortress and find it empty and then head to the throne room only to find lerken soultron and scales and lerken saying how the wraithlands will destroy it self with out him as its king as rothgar shouts for him to release scales lerken says that scales has been working with him before the great crusade was started and that this was a trap then rothgar angerly strikes at lerken but lerken was not hurt and after an epic battle rothgar fell on the ground mordis was finding a way to kill lerken and found the heart of lerken and rushs to tell rothgar only to be stabed in the heart by scales rothgar then got up and had no choice but to kill scales as scales fell rothgar went to mordis hopeing he was still alive as mordis said his dying words to destroy heart to kill lerken rothgar ran to the chamber only to find lerken and soultron they then had a great battle but lerken was to strong rothgar near death told lerken i hope you rot and destroys the heart of lerken causeng an explosion killing rothgar soultron and lerken 200 years later a wraithguard calls the dragonborn for help about a new threat that could destroy the wraithlands. that is the story but i cant do it alone im going to need voice actors scrtpters 3d modulers and a bunch more if your interested and want to hear more pm me or post a comment im helping him out and if you could help to then we could this mod in the game

Edited May 9, 2013 by DragonReaperKing

[Anublet90]

... 200 years later a wraithguard calls the dragonborn for help about a new threat that could destroy the wraithlands.

That's the first piece of punctuation at the end of that sentence. I'm sorry, but I literally can not read that wall of text without it hurting my eyes.

 

In fact, if you cleaned it up a bit, I'm sure more people would go through the trouble of answering you.

[DragonReaperKing]

 

... 200 years later a wraithguard calls the dragonborn for help about a new threat that could destroy the wraithlands.

That's the first piece of punctuation at the end of that sentence. I'm sorry, but I literally can not read that wall of text without it hurting my eyes.

 

In fact, if you cleaned it up a bit, I'm sure more people would go through the trouble of answering you.

I will change it a bit but i need peoples opinion so i can fix it i mostley need 1 scripters because scripting never works for me 2 voice actors because VA 3 3d modelers because i need new armor races weapons and stuff

Edited June 15, 2013 by DragonReaperKing