dezdimona Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 I pace the floorat night,not knowing is thedeepest fright. Safe are youI can't besure,for this ache inmy heart,there is nocure. You answered thecall,you said to becomea man,but now I sit not knowing,how I long to talkto you again. My heart is showing,was it destiny orfate?we shared our lives,and opened upthe gate. let me hear you,Please God keephim safe,the way I feel,I can neverabate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Birrii Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 Wow! great poem! This poem has got it's own unique tempo.great work :banana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted February 24, 2009 Author Share Posted February 24, 2009 Thank you very much! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Storm Raven Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 *the old man tips his hat* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamerbird Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 Aww nice poem Dezi!Gratz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DireStorms Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 Very nice poem ! I can really relate to the words, such emotions burn hotter than any fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted April 3, 2009 Author Share Posted April 3, 2009 he has returned safe and unharmed,for that I'm truely grateful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Storm Raven Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 And for the sake of those you love Dezdimona. We are also grateful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaosals42 Posted April 3, 2009 Share Posted April 3, 2009 Really nice like always Dezi. :thumbsup: Rhyming and the beat were excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johny Obliv Posted April 13, 2009 Share Posted April 13, 2009 Great poem, thanks for sharing it with everyone :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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