t3hf4ll0ut Posted March 25, 2009 Share Posted March 25, 2009 Throughout the day I have visions in my mind of story lines. It's kind of weird, but they just come to me randomly, and this ability made me decide on a career, which is writing. So here's a pretty good one that came to my mind today: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(Name) was a average male/female, who has been going through some rough times. He lost his job due to the poo economy, and the world is falling apart slowly but surely. But after the assassination of the 44th President, Obama, the united states went into turmoil. Racism spread across the country, which ended up leaving the US of A in a state of despair. People desperately struggle to survive in the injured country, forcing them to pull out their guns, and do anything for money or food. But where was the government in all of this? That's what the people wanted to know. What (Name) finds out is that the Government planned the assassination, and they watched the country crumble under their feet. Can (Name) reveal the truth before it's too late? Or will the so called 'Government' pull apart the United States of America just like they had always planned on doing.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is just a rough draft, cause I thought of it like 10 minutes ago, but I am interested in this myself, and plan on progressing even more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monolithic0117 Posted March 25, 2009 Share Posted March 25, 2009 Well, that's a bleak setting. But it's still interesting. I don't think that if Obama was assassinated, racism would just rapidly spread across the country, though. People have their own ideals, Obama's not holding back the door to racism. If racism spread, it would spread very gradually. Also, I don't believe mass racism would leave the USA in ruins. That would be a huge exaggeration. Aside from that, very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t3hf4ll0ut Posted March 26, 2009 Author Share Posted March 26, 2009 Well, that's a bleak setting. But it's still interesting. I don't think that if Obama was assassinated, racism would just rapidly spread across the country, though. People have their own ideals, Obama's not holding back the door to racism. If racism spread, it would spread very gradually. Also, I don't believe mass racism would leave the USA in ruins. That would be a huge exaggeration. Aside from that, very good.Depends on who assassinated him, and why. Also, I did not mean ruins, just a huge struggle. Thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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