Netwit2008 Posted July 14, 2009 Share Posted July 14, 2009 One last one for today. A night cap :) Thanks to all who indulge me by reading my works whether you comment or not. :thanks: Fury Furiously engrossed parasite without a host mercilessly enslaved, drawn to you. Nerves quaking knees buckling, legs shaking wish upon a star images clouded my view. Deliciously irrational nonsensically fanatical you became the delicacy I wanted to consume. Storms unleashed dagger furiously unsheathed stubbed my toe, skinned my heartdistraught, yet I pursue. Shades drawn nobody was home I furiously knocked,you answered “Love” who? Empty space love thoughtlessly kicked in the face shoved back into hibernation, rejected by guess who? No rhyme or reason to these feelings caught out of season furious, I cryand wonder why you couldn't love me too. © TDM 4/29/2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted July 14, 2009 Share Posted July 14, 2009 "T", that tugged at my heart.There is pain and truth in something written, that opens up emotions on that scale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted July 14, 2009 Share Posted July 14, 2009 *amazed*Beautiful ! :)This could really be a gothic song ... or a death-metal one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netwit2008 Posted July 16, 2009 Author Share Posted July 16, 2009 A gracious thank you to the both of you. I always say, I'm not really a poet, just a story teller. Each piece has its own story, often sad or dark, cause such is life sometimes. Gives us more room to experience joy when it comes. Thanks again for supporting me. It's often lonely when you first start posting poetry or stories in a new place. You've both made me feel very welcomed. :thanks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 A gracious thank you to the both of you. I always say, I'm not really a poet, just a story teller. Each piece has its own story, often sad or dark, cause such is life sometimes. Gives us more room to experience joy when it comes. Thanks again for supporting me. It's often lonely when you first start posting poetry or stories in a new place. You've both made me feel very welcomed. :thanks: I'd be glad to see more of your work :)and darker/goth poetry is my favorite ;) Thank you again for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netwit2008 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Share Posted July 20, 2009 Thank YOU for reading it Alex! I appreciate your comments. :smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex2avs Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 I appreciate your writings :) :thanks: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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