Mine Pillow Book

[species5478]

I can not sleep, I can not hide,

Sins of others burdens me deep.

The pillow is wet from tears and sweat,

I roll from side to side.

For injustice keeps me awake all night.

 

Sins that took all light of life.

Lies that stretch a millennium wide.

Dark passages of regrets I run along.

What keeps me going? Do I have still some pride?

No, injustice keeps me awake all night.

 

Pain and fear are with me now.

The dawn breaks light is coming soon.

As I roll and roll in my bed of doom.

Can this not end, I can not stand it,

Got it! injustice keeps me awake all night.

 

I have not slept, I have not dreamed.

The horizons marshaling dawns light.

As I reason with ghosts of past with all my might.

I'm awake and have a gloomy mood but still I'm tired.

Alas, injustice keeps me awake all night.

 

Every night the same process.

Every night the jury of mine

Every night the pain of time

It goes on an on and does not stop.

Powerless, injustice kept me awake all night.

 

I know not a very good and rounded poem. I thought may be someone likes it.

 

I agree Tenaim. Poems have a tendency to form a reflection of the author's inner self, or pieces of it. It does not have to conform to the preconceived notions of others. What you've created here, is an illuminating portrayal of dark emotions...it's something that I would like to use in my newest story, actually. :unsure: What do you think?

[SilverDNA]

If there is something in it or all you want to use species5478 you have my allowance. It would be nice to know, when and where, I have to look if you bring this up. So I'm asking in return to PM me, if your story goes public. That would be nice.

[species5478]

If there is something in it or all you want to use species5478 you have my allowance. It would be nice to know, when and where, I have to look if you bring this up. So I'm asking in return to PM me, if your story goes public. That would be nice.

 

Well, this is in regards to the newest tale I have posted. (Riseof the Horde) There's a riddle that involves a poem in the later chapters. However, I lack a poetic spirit so when I came across your piece, it seemed a perfect match. I may forgo the poem section all together though, because I've never used another's work in my writing. In any case, I'll PM you ahead of time if I decide to use it. If so, your name and poem title will be placed in the story description, as recognition.

[Rheyne]

I've never been shy

When it comes to pie

But imagine my sigh

When I realized

That the pie is a lie!

[SilverDNA]

If there is something in it or all you want to use species5478 you have my allowance. It would be nice to know, when and where, I have to look if you bring this up. So I'm asking in return to PM me, if your story goes public. That would be nice.

 

Well, this is in regards to the newest tale I have posted. (Riseof the Horde) There's a riddle that involves a poem in the later chapters. However, I lack a poetic spirit so when I came across your piece, it seemed a perfect match. I may forgo the poem section all together though, because I've never used another's work in my writing. In any case, I'll PM you ahead of time if I decide to use it. If so, your name and poem title will be placed in the story description, as recognition.

That is O.K. for me. I'm looking onward to read your story and I feel honored because I like your writing style. 

 

@ Rheyne, Nice portal poem!

[Rheyne]

If there is something in it or all you want to use species5478 you have my allowance. It would be nice to know, when and where, I have to look if you bring this up. So I'm asking in return to PM me, if your story goes public. That would be nice.

 

Well, this is in regards to the newest tale I have posted. (Riseof the Horde) There's a riddle that involves a poem in the later chapters. However, I lack a poetic spirit so when I came across your piece, it seemed a perfect match. I may forgo the poem section all together though, because I've never used another's work in my writing. In any case, I'll PM you ahead of time if I decide to use it. If so, your name and poem title will be placed in the story description, as recognition.

That is O.K. for me. I'm looking onward to read your story and I feel honored because I like your writing style. 

 

@ Rheyne, Nice portal poem!

 

Thank ye kindly! I was feeling a bit cheeky.. >:}

[SilverDNA]

About Poets and Poems!

Words, words, nothing but some words in sentences,

Nothing?

Emotions aren't only expressed by the face and actions.

Emotions?

To fell a wound to the skin all animals cry,

to state the words of pain to others counted only as lies?

A sensible soul torn in envious anger apart.

With what? Words!

 

Words caused this within a poem so deep.

The poet had may be something different in heart to keep,

I read the words like I could and would!

I felt something in my mind reflect.

What was it, that I had detect?

A shade, a mirror of myself?

 

I was staring at my self  I read on and on.

Then I thought I should yell "Begone!"

I gazed at the reflection in my mind.

There was another, right behind.

Then noticed that I was between two mirrors!

My other selves glare at me endlessly ashamed.

 

Nearly of all senses bereft,

Felling some other there, someone left.

The poem left some trace of the poet in me.

My mind started to giggle hysterically!

After this done I felt some sympathy.

No there is more, it seamed like empathy.

 

Had it be done? A lot time has flown,

Since a like minded soul touched my own.

From mind to soul to heart the poem had gone!

Surprised by this I had to go on.

I was so joyed by this gentle touch,

In seeing the doing of the poet that much.

 

What I gained was some insight I liked to share.

But how could I do this without showing despair?

Subconscious mind took over and I cooled down.

I had to post that neutral as liquid would flown.

To see into the mirror of self in reading is wrong?

I was taught by hand and pain not to show emotions again.

 

To express these, it comes not easily to me.

So I made a statement, as ripe my age can be.

To show how and what I liked in the poets thoughts.

I mentioned the readers views about the words.

How different the readers are in liking a poem,

I was interpreted as a foe then.

 

Not by the poet, but some tutor of us all, to of the fan, I am in delight.

I did, what I did because I thought it was right!

What is a man, who judges me by arrogance in that?

I'm not regretting my post nor my words I had.

The repulse in your words made me cry out in pain.

Your art with words is known, but why are mine in vain?

 

I found something of myself in another.

People search whole lives to be together,

for some one kindred in mind.

Yet my soul is deeply stained.

Now I feel very sad,

Where my words so very bad?

 

I'm the villain and you are the savior,

Twisted where my words with bravoure.

The Monster slain from soul to the heart.

What was it you said about the art?

To be kind to the people in the garden.

Now you are truly their warden.

 

Now I wonder what you see,

In that mirror of  my misery?

What is poured upon my head,

When live makes me, even with out your words, wish I was dead.

Was there something for you to gain?

From me now bluntly, you DO have plan?

 

I'm a simple man in search for something lost.

Your intentions I question with this post,

Do you have mercy with me, or is this a plot?

Because I was faster, or else, or not?

Back to the Poet before I'm breaking

No harm I thought would be from stating.

If else I apologize, my emotions withholding.

 

I admire your skills in poetry.

I encourage you, I like more to see.

Your visions, thoughts in posts to be.

This, my mind likes to wander free.

If from this you do feel pain,

I'd like to apologize again.

 

What started with mere words,

My rant the audience forgive me please,

Even if viewed as gibberish or drool.

Now I end it with a sentence to ease.

Now to all it should be visible.

An artists soul is very sensible!

-----------------------------------(The end)---------------------------------------------

SiIverDNA  

Edited August 13, 2010 by SilverDNA

[species5478]

"I gazed at the reflection in my mind..." -SilverDNA

 

How eloquent.

[SilverDNA]

"I gazed at the reflection in my mind..." -SilverDNA

 

How eloquent.

Thank you species5478!

Sometimes I'm able to find my eloquence in words

on the borders of strong emotions when writing.

More often I find them not,

I lose them,

because I'm in a state of shock.

[grannywils]

"I gazed at the reflection in my mind..." -SilverDNA

 

How eloquent.

Thank you species5478!

Sometimes I'm able to find my eloquence in words

on the borders of strong emotions when writing.

More often I find them not,

I lose them,

because I'm in a state of shock.

 

Silver, you are more than eloquent. You are such an open, almost electrical being. Sometimes you amaze me. Anyway, your work and your words are beautiful, simply because they are just you.