antonkr Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 When I look in your eyes, they show me the way to go, they show me the way to live. they show me that i am still alive, and that i am still in love. I wake up at night, I look up the sky, but i see no stars in the beautiful sky. Then I look in your eyes and I see two shiny beautiful stars. Wrote those a while ago for a girl I really like. I guess peoms doesn't mean you are not getting rejected :confused: heres my newest one wrote it few minutes ago:Love, was it really worth a shot,Was it worth to find outPretty sure it was better then not knowing it forever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antonkr Posted September 4, 2009 Author Share Posted September 4, 2009 ahh common people its not that bad for 12 year old Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 Intresting, hope to see more as and when you want to shaire them. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aotlianna Posted September 4, 2009 Share Posted September 4, 2009 They're good, and you have a lot of potential. Keep at it! =) Hope you'll share more with us soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antonkr Posted September 4, 2009 Author Share Posted September 4, 2009 Thank you that you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 poems can take many forms,keep at it.A good beginning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antonkr Posted September 5, 2009 Author Share Posted September 5, 2009 I am here to tellI am here to knowI am here to hear you say yes or say no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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