Rheyne Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 Entrancing Depression, Oh how you feed me! A light was fading, but I look around and Ilook up and down.. Nothing.Nothing. Suppression, aggression..Crawling through each crack. Stillness once ran through my mind. Stand!Stand! I will not, I will not PacifySurrenderObliterate! There, beyond the sands,Stopped in the night! Camped for, waiting for nothing once,Twice,Can't feel my heartbeat! For lack of...that word that won't come... Sacrifice breeds sorrow!Stepping down the roads of shadow, Release the fates and let the dawn in. But this headache! Crippling doubt, crippling sorrow.Crippled bodies struggle throughThose fire sandy dunes! The ocean...the sea...My plea for deliverance goes unheard and the comfort...the standstill... Drops of solace trickle coldDancing through my veins..The crystal pain of NUMB!NUMB! WHY CAN'T I FEEL? It procreates, the spider of obsession.Stops me from living,Breathing,Sight. I am insane!I am mother Earth...Sister Death You are no solution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
species5478 Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 Entrancing Depression, Oh how you feed me! A light was fading, but I look around and Ilook up and down.. Nothing.Nothing. Suppression, aggression..Crawling through each crack. Stillness once ran through my mind. Stand!Stand! I will not, I will not PacifySurrenderObliterate! There, beyond the sands,Stopped in the night! Camped for, waiting for nothing once,Twice,Can't feel my heartbeat! For lack of...that word that won't come... Sacrifice breeds sorrow!Stepping down the roads of shadow, Release the fates and let the dawn in. But this headache! Crippling doubt, crippling sorrow.Crippled bodies struggle throughThose fire sandy dunes! The ocean...the sea...My plea for deliverance goes unheard and the comfort...the standstill... Drops of solace trickle coldDancing through my veins..The crystal pain of NUMB!NUMB! WHY CAN'T I FEEL? It procreates, the spider of obsession.Stops me from living,Breathing,Sight. I am insane!I am mother Earth...Sister Death You are no solution. This one taps into another dimension of self... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rheyne Posted August 16, 2010 Author Share Posted August 16, 2010 Entrancing Depression, Oh how you feed me! A light was fading, but I look around and Ilook up and down.. Nothing.Nothing. Suppression, aggression..Crawling through each crack. Stillness once ran through my mind. Stand!Stand! I will not, I will not PacifySurrenderObliterate! There, beyond the sands,Stopped in the night! Camped for, waiting for nothing once,Twice,Can't feel my heartbeat! For lack of...that word that won't come... Sacrifice breeds sorrow!Stepping down the roads of shadow, Release the fates and let the dawn in. But this headache! Crippling doubt, crippling sorrow.Crippled bodies struggle throughThose fire sandy dunes! The ocean...the sea...My plea for deliverance goes unheard and the comfort...the standstill... Drops of solace trickle coldDancing through my veins..The crystal pain of NUMB!NUMB! WHY CAN'T I FEEL? It procreates, the spider of obsession.Stops me from living,Breathing,Sight. I am insane!I am mother Earth...Sister Death You are no solution. This one taps into another dimension of self... It is sort of strange isn't it? But I kind of like it..to me it represents a soldier or a warrior in some kind of battle slipping in and out of consciousness, trying to find the will to keep moving and not give in. Although poetry is supposed to be taken many ways right? Could be about a trip to Mcdonalds, you never know. ^_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilverDNA Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 Giga mega super ROFL :laugh: (trip to Mcdonalds.) If thats the only option eating out of my home, then I'm exactly in the mood of your very accurate poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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