HellsMaster Lastest Large Art! + Learn from me!

[HellsMaster]

-->Hullo,

 

-->I have made this large art, could i possibly recieve feedback from it? And remember i study animal management, not graphics design! ALSO the link to the PSD is under the image, you may download it and LEARN from it ONLY, okay?

 

-->http://i53.tinypic.com/fy0u81.png

 

--> The .PSD, you can use for learning purpouses

http://www.mediafire.com/?gb1u1y007azjyjq

[AliasTheory]

Hooray for lens flare.

 

I looked at the PSD file and I have mixed reactions about the brush effect around the edges. It looks too busy for me. There is also a small white outline on the character...by the head. Normally I might say to just screw it, but the head seems to be a main focus here. I dunno...I'm picky about that kind of thing.

 

I like the added touch to the highlights on the armor though. The lens flare in the upper left was a nice touch too.

 

This might require experimenting but a slightly more dynamic color palette might be nice.

 

Overall it does look great though. Keep it up. :)

[HellsMaster]

:o

[AliasTheory]

Is posting ":o" really contributing to the topic? lol.

 

Anyway, I hope I helped. I have some slight Photoshop experience like yourself...and it is only a hobby for me. :)

[HellsMaster]

it was to say what i thought which is:

Wtf was that you said???

Edit: No brush was used.

[AliasTheory]

Well, here: brush-like effect. The smudging. Whatever you want to call it...however you generated that effect. In my opinion, it is too much.

 

And...I honestly have no idea what you are talking about. That is the feedback which you requested, no?

[HellsMaster]

righttttt... yush, indeed i get it now -.-

i meant to put so much of it, i messed up a bit on the back tho.

and chill the hell out dude!

[AliasTheory]

Uhm...just because I talk formally doesn't mean I'm angry or anything, if that's what you're getting at.

 

Remember it is only constructive criticism and by no means you have to take it; I would suggest more opinions before taking action unless you really think so. :)

[HellsMaster]

It sounded offensive to me, HOWEVER, i did change some of the thing you said, ladies and gents i present to you, the v3!!

http://i55.tinypic.com/2q9i3up.png