farce88 Posted December 12, 2016 Share Posted December 12, 2016 "it seems, behind all this moss, one pole is bend and you could slip through the grate."<is this correct or what would you change? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethreon Posted December 12, 2016 Share Posted December 12, 2016 Seems correct to me. Could also go for a "It seems that, behind all this moss, there's a bent pole that would let you slip through the gate." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farce88 Posted December 12, 2016 Author Share Posted December 12, 2016 yeah that sounds better. thanks a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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