SurePal Posted January 3, 2012 Share Posted January 3, 2012 Hi guys! I've made a little movie from Skyrim, aand I am very excited to get some feedback from it. I tried to be little cinematic but still stay on track. I had couple issues making the video, because it was my first video, and thats why it was little hard. When I've uploaded it first time there was copyright issues and I had to change all music etc.....I used Fraps to film and Sony Vegas Pro 10 to edit.Basically movie tell's about General Wint who just conquered Fort Amol and now Stormcloaks are coming to counter-attack. If you want to check it out: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjrHmwlp65I but really, you don't have to watch if you don't want to or you are not interested, remember that. But I would be grateful. Btw, english isn't my native language so it's not that good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoptic Posted January 3, 2012 Share Posted January 3, 2012 (edited) Haha indeed English is not your mother tongue :D I thought the narration was a bit weird :DYou could have removed the crosshair. The movie could do with some voice acting too.The epic Skyrim Theme fits in, but I would have made it begin with an equally awesome picture, I mean on your movie when they begin to sing "Dohvakiin" we just see a guy walking out, I had rather thought of an epic sword fight or something like that :) Overall, I find it kinda cool and I'm sure you put a lot of work to it :) I'd say you can improve the narration, and you could make an original story too rather than a simple fort-besieging movie. Nice work anyway, I wish I was able to do half what you did. Edited January 3, 2012 by Hoptic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SurePal Posted January 3, 2012 Author Share Posted January 3, 2012 I need to study english little bit more? Duu juu agrii with mii? :biggrin: """I thought the narration was a bit weird :DYou could have removed the crosshair. The movie could do with some voice acting too.""" You are right, thanks for feedback! This was my first video so it wasn't perfect, but i'll try to do better job on next vid. :) What I don't personally like that much is the ending (but I can continue story from it maybe) and I messed up that music scene when man walks out "Dovhvakiin dohvakiin" that just didn't fit at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
surg23 Posted January 3, 2012 Share Posted January 3, 2012 That was pretty cool, i enjoyed it. :thumbsup: Was waiting for Wint to get head-shotted by a stray arrow during his escape, maybe next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SurePal Posted January 3, 2012 Author Share Posted January 3, 2012 Thanks man! :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PR4Y Posted January 3, 2012 Share Posted January 3, 2012 (edited) VERY GOOD!!! Obviously could use a few small improvements, but I won't be a nitpicker... because TBH we NEED more stuff like this. Keep up the good work and PLEASE MAKE MORE!!! *Kudos Given* Edited January 3, 2012 by PR4Y Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SurePal Posted January 3, 2012 Author Share Posted January 3, 2012 OMG thanks man!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabbit1251 Posted January 3, 2012 Share Posted January 3, 2012 I enjoyed that. I marvel at your control during the fortress pans. Fairly smooth, all considered. Nice!! Rabbit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elendre Posted January 3, 2012 Share Posted January 3, 2012 This was great!! And for a first video ever you did awesome :-) I really do hope we get to see more from you- the feedback here is excellent and I look forward to seeing a more polished part II. I agree we need to see more projects like this and should support those who are brave enough to dive in and give it a try. You did great and a kudo to you for your wonderful first efforts. More, please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SurePal Posted January 3, 2012 Author Share Posted January 3, 2012 Thanks guys! I might do some more stuff :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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