Herculine Posted September 9, 2009 Share Posted September 9, 2009 Thanks for the compliments, all. But I'm not trying to upstage Dezdimona or hijack her thread. Not that I think anyone is saying that, just that I felt the need to say something. I'm just a noob who happened across some really wonderful people here. Dezdimona is my inspiration and the true artist here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 10, 2009 Author Share Posted September 10, 2009 I think aboutYou, night andDay Your sexy smileSeems to brightenMy way I think ofUs together atPlay Your eyes ablazeYour hips thatSway Your on myMind when yourAway It makes forA sad andLonely day I can stillSmell your sweetPerfume Oh how thatFragrance fills a Room I love howYou tease andTantalize The look of The devil alive In your darkEyes The way youGiggle when I Kiss your sweetNeck The touch of Your fingers onMy nipples soErect You fill myDreams and wakingHours too How I yearnTo make passionateLove just toYou To touch yourHair, your neck,Your face Your style, yourCharm, your tenderEmbrace Into my armsYou do gentlyGlide How I craveTo be at Your side Take me awayAnd never doUs part Just be myLove and endThis ache inMy heart. The Chronicles of Sticks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordTenaim Posted September 10, 2009 Share Posted September 10, 2009 Wonderful Dezi. Why is it painfulwhen you go.what have I donewhy did you goIs love conditionalIs it unconditionalall I know is to loose youis pain beyond all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herculine Posted September 10, 2009 Share Posted September 10, 2009 Rhyme in poetry?Seriously, I could feel emotions coming from both of the above poems. That's what I believe poetry is all about.Wonderful poems, both of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fifoo Posted September 17, 2009 Share Posted September 17, 2009 Your poems are like a symphonywords are playing togetherthey blow away near secret placeswhere beauty and love reignsand we are on your kneesadmiring this marvelous scenein hope of never ending times... Thank you, sweet great Lady :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dezdimona Posted September 17, 2009 Author Share Posted September 17, 2009 Your poems are like a symphonywords are playing togetherthey blow away near secret placeswhere beauty and love reignsand we are on your kneesadmiring this marvelous scenein hope of never ending times... Thank you, sweet great Lady :thumbsup:I thank you for the tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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