Feedback On Character Idea? ^_^

[EpicRandomGuy]

Saskia is an Elf with both Altmer and Dunmer blood from the province of Cyrodiil. Her parents (Altmer mother, Dunmer father) met and fell in love after meeting and saving each other during the Great War. Her mother, Abrigaile, was a powerful mage and a high-ranking member of the Synod, and her father, Tevaris, was a member of a Brotherhood whose existence was known only to very few. Abrigaile, though of Altmer descent, was a faithful Imperial and served as a battlemage during the Great War. Tevaris worked to liberate the people through assassinations aand espionage. The two met when Tevaris freed Abrigaile from a Thalmor prison camp, slightly before the fall of the Imperial City; Together the two escaped, leaving behind little more than burned earth, arrows, and Thalmor corpses. After the fall of the Imperial City, they married and gave birth to Saskia. Around ten years later, Thalmor assassins caught up to the family; Abrigaile and Tevaris defended their daughter, but were killed in the process. Saskia, now alone in the world, took her mother's spell books and her fathers robes and weapons and took to the streets, where she has since lived a bitter life, trusting no one and working only for herself. She has come to Skyrim to master magic and exact vengeance for her parents' deaths.

 

-Dark Elf Appearence

-Dark and High Elf Abilities (Including Highborn)

-Few Morals (Just Don't Kill the Bunnies)

-Cold and Untrusting

-Only Helps Others if it Will Benefit Her

-Robes/Light Armor

-One-Handed (Sword/Dagger), All Sneak Skills, All Magic Skills, Archery

-Father's Ruthlessness and Cunning, Occasional Mother's Kindness (Usually Hates Everything But Sometimes Feels Bad and Does the Right Thing)

-Won't Watch Others Suffer (Healing Hands, Poor People)

-Won't Be Responsible for Innocents Being Hurt for Her (Meaning Maybe One Follower)

-WILL Hurt Innocents (If for Good Reason)

-WILL Steal (Without Hesitation)

-Kills Thalmor and Screw the Consequences

-Doesn't Join Imperial Army (Eww, Orders, and Thalmor "Alliance")

-Follows Ralof (Why Trust the Guy Who Was Gonna Kill Her?)

-Has Certain Items at Beginning of Game

*Regal Assassin Robes

*Black Spike Dagger

*Some Random Higher-Level Spell Tomes

*Eastern Glass Bow

-College

-Thieves Guild

-Dark Brotherhood

-Maybe Vampire

-Scavenges a Lot (Force of Habit)

[zyg0tic]

Are you going to be recording your gameplay? Permadeath? Mods? (:

[WatchMeGoing]

This line seems to be completely out of character:

-Won't Watch Others Suffer (Healing Hands, Poor People)

 

Especially after you already said this:

-Only Helps Others if it Will Benefit Her

 

Think about it. As an assassin/thief, she is going to cause a lot of suffering. "Won't watch others suffer" is a very hypocritical stance for someone like her.